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for The Heirloom

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule May 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet. Wow. I loved his closeness and tenderness with his mother. But, I think he may have lied to her by mistake, as I don't see an easy, amicable divorce in 6 months. :-) Thanks, hon!! HG4eva
person Flaming Moth of Doom
schedule May 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good to see you back and writing again! You're one of my favorite fic authors here :)

I usually ship Draco/Hermione, but you write Lucius so well, it's a delight to read this story. Looking forward to more!
schedule May 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8

Lucius' Mom! We dont know anything about her in canon, and I dont think I have read a fanfic yet where she is part of the story. She obviously loves her son and he loves her. Sweet chapter and I like where Lucius' thoughts about Hermione are centered!!

LBE
person Alesia
schedule May 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I completely adore the idea that Lucius' mother is still around. Your description of her is wonderful. I can see her in my head. I really want her to meet Hermione. Do I really have to wait two days for the next chapter?
schedule May 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7:

*Sigh* This was sweet and tender. I think I said it before, Lucius is a very proud, arrogant man. This side of him that you have shown makes me love him all the more because it isnt the kind of behavior he shows the outside world. Can I have a turn with this Lucius?? ;)
schedule May 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8:

*sigh* (again) LOL Will we ever find out what Lucius is thinking when he is looking at her face at 4 in the morning? I would think Hermione's responses and reactions to his touch were quite unexpected to him. I, like Hermione, wonder why he stayed. Regardless I think him staying, and the second bout of lovemaking has changed their relationship more than either of them realize at this moment. Harry and Ron's reaction were typical. Harry has a hero complex, even if he never asked to be a hero in life anyway. He needs to remember Hermione is a big girl and can take care of herself. Ron is just...Ron. Predictable...lol. I do adore Hermione's defense of Lucius and how she put her boys in their place. Me thinks she has started to care more than she knows.....

Love
LBE
person nari-chan
schedule May 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
great lemon scene i loved it and i have always been of the option older man are better in bed then the younger ones ;)
please update soon i cant wait to read what happens the morning after!
person Alesia
schedule May 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Okay that chapter was short and sweet and amusing as Hell. Ron and Harry really don't know her at all do they? After all this time they should know better than to tell Hermione not to do something. The fact it's in the papers complicates the idea of the divorce in six months. Lucius won't want to be divorced. I wonder if it is Draco that is going to bring him to the stark reality of being stuck with her.
schedule May 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting how her confusion with him turned to defense of him in a hot second. lol That night must have been amazing! ha ha ha Also very interesting that he chose to do it a second time. Methinks these two are not on the road to divorce. :-) Loving it! Thank you, HG4eva
schedule May 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
DUDE!!! Just...WOW.... I can't say anything else except welcome back! And you came back with a bang!!!!! You rock!