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for The Heirloom

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule May 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful! I loved the ending and the hope it offered. I'd like to think they "lived happily ever after." I look forward to more from you and once again welcome you back! Take care, HG4eva
schedule May 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
They are going to be so much closer than lovers or many married couples. They are going to be true friends. That was very well done, dear! Thank you, HG4eva
person Nightqueen
schedule May 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was, OMG! so beautiful, hot and sexy. No one and I mean no one writes like you do.
Amazing!
person Alesia
schedule May 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh please tell be they don't part ways at the end of this story. This chapter was incredibly intense but you wrote their exchange in such a way that it was much less physical than it was emotional. They work so well together I really want to see them find a way to stay together.
person colao
schedule May 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wonderful job conveying the emotional intensity without drawing it out with too many words!
schedule May 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely, sweet and supportive. I feel for him and love his valet. I like your Hermione even more now for doing what needed to be done and standing by him, as well as giving him what he needed to get through his initial grief. Thank you! HG4eva
schedule May 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! Please keep it coming!!
person Scheclair
schedule May 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So sad and at the same time so sweet... I love your stories!
person LittleLotte
schedule May 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell Batman! That was so sad but sweet. I recently lost a mother-in-law and sometimes it's easy to forget how many emotions lay beneath their tough exterior. Very well done and I can't wait to see what happens next!
person Sampdoria
schedule May 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yuppi, a new update. I admit to have been looking for it several times before today and I was so happy when I found it now:-))