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May 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
NICE! ADD MORE PLEASE!
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November 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow are you kidding with your remarks at the beginning of your chapter?! In first chapter you wrote hair instead of heir!! Maybe you could read what you wrote before clashing other people's comments! Even in this chapter you made mistakes : Ramus instead of Remus!
Critics are supposed to be helpful so think about what is said to you and try to better your writing style!
Critics are supposed to be helpful so think about what is said to you and try to better your writing style!
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November 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Damn I just saw that it was not your answer to a review but a review itself ...
I'm kind of embarrassed now! Sorry!
I'm kind of embarrassed now! Sorry!
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November 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
T.T chapter 3 and 4 are the same.
I actually like this! Is it anywhere else or are you continuing??
I actually like this! Is it anywhere else or are you continuing??
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May 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS NOT A FLAME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(just an f.y.i.)
KittyMama, you posted chapter 3 twice (2 times). So chapters 3 and 4 are identical. Just for your information. That's all folks (you and your muse), and I look forward to the next installment of your story.
KittyMama, you posted chapter 3 twice (2 times). So chapters 3 and 4 are identical. Just for your information. That's all folks (you and your muse), and I look forward to the next installment of your story.
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October 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
...?
umm, you do realize you posted ch 3 twice, right?
just saying. other than that, I really like this.
umm, you do realize you posted ch 3 twice, right?
just saying. other than that, I really like this.
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June 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
chapter three is up twice.
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June 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You are aware that chapters 3 & 4 are the same, correct? Would you, please, correct that?
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June 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
chapter 4 is the same chapter as 3
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January 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Huh, were you aware the fourth chapter is a repeat of the third? Other than that, this was a cute story. Please fix the story!