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April 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love the flashback but now I want to know what's next.... ;-P
Thanks! ;-)
Thanks! ;-)
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April 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@2 liking the story. I think that it would be easier to put a flashback headin at the top only because as the story progresses and more chapters appear readers may forget which font was for which.
DB
DB
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April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. Can't wait to read more. :)
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April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Um...YES. We'd like to read the rest of it! You can't just throw that out there and then leave us hanging! Bring it on! ;-P
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April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I would like to see where you take this, sign me up. :-)
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April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm in!!
More, please ;-P
More, please ;-P
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April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The change of Font would be fine.
Poor Ron, like Harry said he would not even be considered a match.
Poor Ron, like Harry said he would not even be considered a match.
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April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I love it when Ron's a dick. lol I like this take on the marriage law. It's nice when people just get thrown together because they have to, not because they were petitioned for and had to choose. As for the font thing. I think a simple italic would do...most of us recognise that as a flashback. Although, I kinda guessed it was a flashback just from context. It's up to you, though. Can't wait to read more! :)
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April 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm interested in reading more, please continue
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April 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I loved the start and hope you continue. :-) Thanks and good luck! HG4eva