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for The Only True Lords

by Lomonaaeren

person Ciara_D
schedule April 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This bond is just falling apart, one at a time. Really curious about where this is going. Harry is seriously maturing.
person SP777
schedule April 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #47..

1.
person delia cerrano
schedule April 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry! He just needs a good long rest. And Severus (who I love and everyone has always taken advantage of & treated sooo poorly) needs to get over himself. He needs to pull himself up and decide what he wants the future to be. Stop trying to live in the past making sense of a senseless cruel time. Setting blame in order to assure himself that he could do nothing to save or alter anything. He feels guilty...that he should have been able to do more to stop the evil.
person SP777
schedule March 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #46...

Poor child is going to age 3 years over this. *shakes head*
Part of me says...let Snape go out of spite, the other says rub his
face in the stupidity that only an intelligent man can bring.
person delia cerrano
schedule March 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Really good chapter. Harry is so patient with these ungrateful people. It's a wonder that he doesn't just screw you all...I saved our world and am trying to care for you few that have known me & what I've gone through all my life and this is what I get? They even tried to drag me into the vassels trials.
person Polka dot
schedule March 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The rest should be easy. I guess Draco might be a bit a pain, because that's Draco.
person minieegold
schedule March 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you!!
person SP777
schedule March 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #45...

Sooo...will you title the next chapter...'Things that Idiots do that make Lords want to Bang their Heads against the Wall?' :-)
..or 'Things that Idiots Do..' for short.

I have to admit Harry is coming up slowly but surely, as a good Lord who does & says things that are necessary to ensure
the wellbeing of his vassals, no matter how dumb their actions can be.

...and I have to say Gregory is the one bright spot in Harry's life.
person delia cerrano
schedule March 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love Severus (especially paired with Harry) but he can be such an ass and his own worst enemy! He just can't see Harry as just himself and that some of the way Harry acts are because of what life as done to him. Now he seems to be ready to shoot himself in the foot again.
person BAFan
schedule March 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 45

"In the silence, immediately followed by uproar, that started then, all Harry could really hear was his own pounding heart, and all he could think was, Snape, you idiot."

Yep, that about covers it. Very interesting twist; can't wait to see what results from it!