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April 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #50...
..and I see a beautiful friendship forming somewhere over the horizon.
* you don't have to respond to this review if you don't want to.
..and I see a beautiful friendship forming somewhere over the horizon.
* you don't have to respond to this review if you don't want to.
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April 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #49..
1. I always felt it was unfair that the Gryffindors were treated with golden gloves, while ALL
the Slytherins were all seen as...minions of darkness. I think the newer generations of Slytherins
had a bad rap, because of the past generation, who basically spewed the nonsense their parents said.
2. By the way, this IS a Harry & Draco story, right?
3. By the way, you handled Pansy's trial perfectly.
1. I always felt it was unfair that the Gryffindors were treated with golden gloves, while ALL
the Slytherins were all seen as...minions of darkness. I think the newer generations of Slytherins
had a bad rap, because of the past generation, who basically spewed the nonsense their parents said.
2. By the way, this IS a Harry & Draco story, right?
3. By the way, you handled Pansy's trial perfectly.
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April 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best versions of Pansy I've enjoyed on this site.
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April 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I feel sorry for the Slytherins. That was a really strong scene where you showed that a Slytherin student was denied safety by the other students. I don't think Harry would have allowed that if he had been there and it's not something he probably knew much about since he was gone at the time. People may often be afraid and not fight back but against someone they feel is weaker or for revenge... that may change things. Harry may not realize that after the trials are over there will still be negative opinions that and attitudes that will cause problems for his vassals.
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April 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Continues to be fun to read. So glad Severus, who I love, is begining to wise up. I really feel bad for Blaise but you can't force someone to grow up or to see the truth.
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April 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #48...
I have misgivings..in a way I will miss the fact Severus will not be a Shield
for Harry anymore, in a sense or will he still remain so?
I have misgivings..in a way I will miss the fact Severus will not be a Shield
for Harry anymore, in a sense or will he still remain so?
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April 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 48
Bravo, Severus! That took guts, not only to accept the insight into his behavior, but also to admit it to Harry. Well done.
Bravo, Severus! That took guts, not only to accept the insight into his behavior, but also to admit it to Harry. Well done.
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April 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Glad to read that Severaus is finally starting to come around to realize how illogically he was acting and blaming people. Poor Blaise can't seem to see reality in connection with his mom. He doesn't see how she plays with his emotions & loyalty as well as his brain.
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April 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Snape is confusing, but in a way, make sense for the confusing circumstances in which he finds himself.
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April 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
is there a sequal or new chapters?