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for The Only True Lords

by Lomonaaeren

person delia cerrano
schedule April 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Is Zabini's arm burned horribly or just just burned? Maybe it was just internal & nothing shows? Seems like everyone is just about hysterical and really just need to sit quietly talking to see what everyones concerns are & what ideas they all might have for getting rid of the bond rather than assuming things.
person Jien
schedule April 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm curious what sort of consequence Blaise's action will bring about.
Nice chapter :)
person Leania07
schedule April 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, I'm curious to see where you go with this. I hope you update soon, thought if you said every 5 days I might hold you to that ;)
I'm not quite sure why they all believe being tied to Harry is such a bad thing; they're Slytherins, if a Gryffindor is supposed to protect them, wouldn't that be a comfort that anyone who hurts them would have to answer to Harry Potter, and over 85% of the wizarding world wouldn't want to cross their Savior. I can understand Severus' reluctance, after all he's still suffering from his misconceptions about Harry; but the other's don't know him at all. Well I'm curious to see where you take this, and I'm wondering who the pairing will be (or is it a multiple?). Keep up the good work, I look forward to more.

Leania
person Jien
schedule April 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter. Will stay alert for updates :)
person heartstar
schedule April 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
your welcome wow hopefully harry isn't to late and blaise didn't do something stupidmaye he left instead? more when you can hun...
person Nathoca Malfoy
schedule April 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Please continue! Don't take too long to update!
schedule April 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I foresee a very intriguing tale. I have long felt that Voldemort's Dark Mark/bond was incomplete, that even with the laws of magic set forth by JKR herself, that there was no equilibrium, no balance between the parties. I like the idea of the bond restricting the Lord as much as the vassal. Looking forward to watching the events in your world as they unfold!
schedule April 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another great cliff-hanger. I'm on pins and needles.
Don' worry, just got two finals and a term paper, and I'm on it.
Reading fanfictions doesn't exactly help me study, but I use it as a reward system, and your are like candy.
person delia cerrano
schedule April 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think this could be a lot of fun! Poor Snape the third Overlord!! And he feels such a need to protect Draco and the rest.
Where did Zabini go? Can he just leave without his lords' permission? I guess he can since he did except maybe he has to be punished now?
person ChrisF.
schedule April 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Harry is such an idiot. Im not saying he has to like it (I would) but he needs to grow up and deal with it, not whine about it. Besides, I think most writers forget that Harry is British. The Monarchy and royal protocal is ingrained in him, the idea of being a Lord shouldn't be that farfetched for him. I'm glad to see you updated so fast. A lot of fics on AFF get lost and forgotten because you can't track them like FFN. Sadly FFN isn't loading for me. Cant wait for more.