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I am very suspicious of that healer. She seems kind of weird. Seems like the life debts that Draco & Harry had for each other would cancel each other out.

about #5..

Hopeless.

Everyone seems hopeless...and helpless. Will the solution the Slytherins thought of help a little?

and will Kislik's, who reminds me too much of Snape, little suggestion backfire...do more harm than good?

i had forgotten what a wonderous story weaver you are. my only disappointment with this is that there isn't more of it yet. :P
how many slyths does har now have leashed?
it's good to be back. stupid net issues. >>

Interesting chapter. I guess Ginny doesn't trust Harry that much anymore after hearing what he unconsciously did to Blaise - though why she thinks he could hurt her when she isn't even part of the bond is beyond me, unless she thinks he would suddenly snap and attack her with his wand or so.

I admit I had to laugh a bit at Harry's description of Snape when the latter admonished him for his use of 'sir'.

I wonder what the rest of the, well, bond partners think of the whole situation. So far we've mainly seen Blaise, Snape, Draco and now Pansy as well reacting to the bond, so it'll be interesting to read how the others will react.

Anyway, another great chapter :) Looking forward to the next one

I like this twist on how to keep the Slytherins out of Azkaban, mostly.
Harry's Lordship could be seen as a lesser, or worse, punishment for their involvement with the Dark Side.
I wonder if the centaur thing was a premonition or just weird logic and loyalty on their side, though they've never been particularly fond of Harry before.
Great job as always,
Bob.

Waiting for Draco to be closer at least to Harry. Wonder why Harry can tell what's going on with Severus sometimes but not always. Must be the intensity of his emotion?

about #4...

All I can say is 'Oooo...!' and that was a very intense ending there, well that and
yeah, Severus' assessment of Harry's stature kinda put a grey cloud on Harry's effectiveness
as Lord. Thus, must he be a shorty all his young life?

This is an interesting concept. I'd rather like more the idea of a Snape/Harry/Draco rather than only Draco, but I digress.

Keep it up!

I would have expected Draco to be the one to rush in doing something to try and undo the bond. Didn't really expect Blaise to be the one, but it made for an interesting change to read things from his perspective (because you usually write the perspective from Harry's, Draco's or Snape's side)

I do wonder though - would the bond have killed Blaise if Harry hadn't been able to find a way to stop the punishment on time? Because I'd think that trying to kill your Lord would be the worst possible offense that would be punished by immediate death.

Anyway like always I'm curious to read the next chapter :) For some reason, I'm really interested in reading Snape's reaction when he discovers what Blaise tried to do.
Anyway, great chapter :)

about #3,...

I take it Zabini was used as an example to show how fruitless it was to resist the bond
between Lord & vassal? And how stupid actions causes unecessary grief.

Harry needs to start laying ground rules or they will all test his patience...and he will
wind up killing them accidently out of irritation. Nice to see the centaurs make a brief appearance
in your story.

...and must Harry remain short throughout his young life in this story?

Other than that, it's good to see you take the 'Harry as Dark Lord' theme and put it in this section,
so folks can get a taste of something new, I don't think I've said that yet. If I already did, well here
it is again! All in all, I'm enjoying myself.