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about #13...

Me: Harry, take a bow. :-)
Harry: Why? O_O
Me: Because that was the best arguing I've ever seen a young man do
and you didn't stutter not one time. :-)
Harry: *blushes* Well...I was just telling the truth and I want everyone to be
treated fairly!
Me: Well, Keep it up and you will be a great Lord someday, even I would follow you.
Harry: :-)
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You know you always get your titles from books & poems, don't you think this story deserves
a good quote at the end, when all is said and done?

I know this will eventually be a Harry Draco story but is it wrong that I really like the Harry Severus parts? :)

Now the plot is really tightening and Harry is saying stuff I've been raving about here at my computer. Love appreciating Harry more. And absolutely crazy about Harry putting the Wizgamont in their place! Yes,this was a very happy chapter for me. Pansy, Blaise all were not fighting Harry tooth & nail even. Now if Harry's love life would just perk up I'd be in 7th heaven.

Excellent confrontation scene!

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this is the best story i have read on aff.net in a looooooooog time

drat, missed one again. well, that won't happen anymore... i love that update list.
anywho, what the hell is that twat using for a brain? did he really think he'd get away with hexing har? idiot.
wow, blaise really is hard core coward in this huh.
hmmm, with har tossed into the questioning mix, things just got a lot more interesting. I'm glad sev realizes there's a possibility for being more than lord and minion with har. its' not like har wanted to be a lord in the first place.
i know the WW doesn't have any common sense, but why the hell didn't they just view a pensive memory of the incident rather the grilling the subjects?

Ch. 12

Grrr. Stupid auto-correct! That should have been "Defendere." And I forgot to say I'm glad that Kingsley was ultimately willing to give Snape the benefit of the doubt, although really he should have done that from the beginning.

About #12...

Why does this feel like it's about to become a hot mess? Because the bias that's already
surrounding them is mind baffling. :-! The only hope I can see right now is Snape using his intellect and
Harry keeping his cool...and some fancy words thrown out there to confuse the masses.

looooonnnngggerrrrrr.....make the chapter much much much much loooonnngggerrrrr... I totally liked Severus leading them around by the nose with all their questioning. But you stopped right as Harry arrived!!! meanie once again. You could have at least waited until Harry said something. Too bad these meetings aren't televised... that might keep them more honest.

the trap on the Ministry is closing! Can't wait to see how Harry tears them a new one!