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for The Only True Lords

by Lomonaaeren

person delia cerrano
schedule July 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Harry is really developing into quite a guy! The bond seems to be more better for him than bad. It seems to be maturing and educating him...making him more socially smooth or acceptable some how.
person delia cerrano
schedule June 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm not clear on why Severus now wants to stay in the bond but I'm very glad he does. I think he needs to feel that someone cares about him on a closer more personal level than the general friendship level of Pomphrey or Minerva. I don't think he realizes this except in his unconcious mind.
person delia cerrano
schedule June 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Gregg seems so sweet and simple...young boy like. I hope Severus stays with Harry. I think they would be a strength for each other...understanding each other more than others could. I hope Draco comes around to see that he can be independent and yet part of a pair. Pansy? Sheesh, she needs to calm down. She is planning on being the high supreme mugwhomp by next eweekend!
schedule June 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Methinks Snape is feeling unsettled because he doesn't want to leave the bond but he hasn't realized it yet. Poor Snape... but like Harry he is a born protector and that is the role the bond put him in as Harry's vassal so it's probably strange to him that he feels like he should feel comfortable in the bond... it is playing to his strengths. With the war over and all those years protecting Harry... he is in the position that feels natural even if he is unwilling to acknowledge it.
person BAFan
schedule June 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 59

Loved this chapter. The conversation between Greg and his mother was very touching, and I hope Pansy's letter has equally good results. Snape...I don't know about him. Even if he lets himself acknowledge that it might not be such a bad thing to be under the bond, will he stay in it? Or will his pride and stubbornness compel him to go through with the severing?

Really looking forward to the next chapter!
person Kain
schedule June 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
so

freaking

SORRY

have not read new chapter yet as my fucking computer has been in the shop for the last 2 weeks. LITERALLY minutes before i started writing my review my net crashed on me and I discovered after bringing my laptop in that my hardrive was done,finite,equalized,future endeavored etc. I lost everything on my comp and now am in the process of getting all the crap back..............twas A LOT of crap so my review will hopefully be in Saturday morning at the latest.
person SP777
schedule June 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #58..

Well that was the most honest conversation between them yet.
I was wondering the same thing about when they would get together, because here
we are in the 50+ chapter...and NO sign of what would bring them together, which
I have to admit is unusual for you.
person delia cerrano
schedule June 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good. The trials are over and we can explore Draco and Harry...their relationship and how it's changing (yes I want Drarry) and Pansy's manipulations to be more politically powerful as well as how Ron and Hermione feel about Draco's continuing and growing (I hope) relationship and how they act.
person BAFan
schedule June 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 58

"...He lifted his head, and Harry couldn
person SP777
schedule June 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #57...

Thank Merlin for sensible parents!