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November 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #30...
Daaaammmmmmnn!!! O_O
Black widow spiders & evil little demons ain't got nothing on Mrs. Zabini! Talk
about hacking away to pieces...boy!
*sigh* Hopefully he learns to stand on his own two feet in time and that his allies are
closer than he expects...and that 'Gryffindor' Lord will treat him better than family and
not forsake him.
Daaaammmmmmnn!!! O_O
Black widow spiders & evil little demons ain't got nothing on Mrs. Zabini! Talk
about hacking away to pieces...boy!
*sigh* Hopefully he learns to stand on his own two feet in time and that his allies are
closer than he expects...and that 'Gryffindor' Lord will treat him better than family and
not forsake him.
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November 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
BITCH! You don't deserve to have Blaise as a son!
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November 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think he cares more about how Blaise was frightened then what she wants. *snicker*
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November 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #29..
You know not everyone takes the time to 'flesh out' Mrs. Zabini's character, much
less try to write about her. I'm surprised you did and doing a good job, thus far.
She's not patterned after your mother is she...and not in an evil way. :-)
Oh, and give her hell Harry!
You know not everyone takes the time to 'flesh out' Mrs. Zabini's character, much
less try to write about her. I'm surprised you did and doing a good job, thus far.
She's not patterned after your mother is she...and not in an evil way. :-)
Oh, and give her hell Harry!
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November 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
YOU GO HARRY! I love this story. I love what you've done with the characters and I love where it's going (or at least where I THINK it's going - I'm not ruining any surprises for myself). I love finding well-done fan fiction. It's the best of delights!
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November 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Something that has been on my mind since they were introduced but........where the actual fuck were these so called "Freedom Fighters" when Muggleborns were being round up like cattle? They choose now to come out of the woodwork to oppose the guy who just saved the freaking world, ACCIDENTALLY created the bond and has stated over and over and over again that he is trying to undo it? Sweet Jesus, I am sure these people mean well, at least from there point of view but they need to get their shit in order.
Another thing is that not having a Dark mark does not necessarily make you innocent. Fenrir and quite a few others did not bare the mark and still did quite a few evil things under Voldemorts command. Not that I am trying to compare the Slytherin students to those monsters but while many of them did not have a mark, they were still firmly in Voldemorts camp(mostly due to their parents, but still) and even if things work out and they get through the trials and even with Harry' protection, they are going to carry a stigma to their names for some time.
Pansy continues to grow on me, slowly but surely. Liked seeing her use her wits to gleam some useful info to report to her lord. Out of everyone she seems to be taking to the bond more smoothly and is making the best out of her situation. Although her ass would have been grass if Mrs. Zabini had caught her snooping. And since you have seen the other reviews I have left here and on your other stories, you know my opinion on Slytherins, so for me to admit that I am liking your portrayal of Pansy says a lot.
And this:
"Again Hermione and Ron moved without question, and Harry felt a glow as he looked at them. They weren’t his vassals. They didn’t have to obey. There were just his friends, and that was enough."
http://media.tumblr.com/8cfc9aadfb92a8cc8e3cae07b93a8809/tumblr_inline_mv1tqxB3ta1r7or11.gif
Damn it you three, stop being so freaking perfect. The shear amount of loyalty and trust shared between them is so absolute. They have had their ups and downs but at the end of the day.....you fuck with one of them, you deal with the whole damn crew.
And hot damn, Blaise's mother is a real piece of work. Goes a long way to showing why Blaise is the way he is. Loved seeing Harry lay down the law before she could even get a word in. If she wa hoping to intimadate him he just lost some major ground and with his peeps at his back, she is in for one hell of a fight, be it verbal or physical. these 3 toppled a fully grown troll in their first god damned year and during there time in Hogwarts kept getting the better of an "immortal" dark wizard and his cronies on a yearly bases and through sheer luck, a bit of brains and brass balls, finished him for good eventually..........she is nothing.
Lovely chapter as always.
-waits patiently for the next chapter-
Another thing is that not having a Dark mark does not necessarily make you innocent. Fenrir and quite a few others did not bare the mark and still did quite a few evil things under Voldemorts command. Not that I am trying to compare the Slytherin students to those monsters but while many of them did not have a mark, they were still firmly in Voldemorts camp(mostly due to their parents, but still) and even if things work out and they get through the trials and even with Harry' protection, they are going to carry a stigma to their names for some time.
Pansy continues to grow on me, slowly but surely. Liked seeing her use her wits to gleam some useful info to report to her lord. Out of everyone she seems to be taking to the bond more smoothly and is making the best out of her situation. Although her ass would have been grass if Mrs. Zabini had caught her snooping. And since you have seen the other reviews I have left here and on your other stories, you know my opinion on Slytherins, so for me to admit that I am liking your portrayal of Pansy says a lot.
And this:
"Again Hermione and Ron moved without question, and Harry felt a glow as he looked at them. They weren’t his vassals. They didn’t have to obey. There were just his friends, and that was enough."
http://media.tumblr.com/8cfc9aadfb92a8cc8e3cae07b93a8809/tumblr_inline_mv1tqxB3ta1r7or11.gif
Damn it you three, stop being so freaking perfect. The shear amount of loyalty and trust shared between them is so absolute. They have had their ups and downs but at the end of the day.....you fuck with one of them, you deal with the whole damn crew.
And hot damn, Blaise's mother is a real piece of work. Goes a long way to showing why Blaise is the way he is. Loved seeing Harry lay down the law before she could even get a word in. If she wa hoping to intimadate him he just lost some major ground and with his peeps at his back, she is in for one hell of a fight, be it verbal or physical. these 3 toppled a fully grown troll in their first god damned year and during there time in Hogwarts kept getting the better of an "immortal" dark wizard and his cronies on a yearly bases and through sheer luck, a bit of brains and brass balls, finished him for good eventually..........she is nothing.
Lovely chapter as always.
-waits patiently for the next chapter-
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November 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Delia cerrano & I read this together as her computor is in the shop. Enjoyed it and can't wait to see Harry put Ms Zabini in her place. She is a real barracuda! At least I hope he does. Maybe Blaise will see her as she is then. He still has to talk to the three Malfoys. I hope Severus will start to appreciate Harry for all he has done and is doing while he is still a boy or young man without the teaching and background he should have had. Dumbledore and the ministry have always used Harry as a blind club rather then as a knowledgeable surgical instrument.
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November 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am wondering where and how kreacher gets food for everyone. Kinda odd but I guess wizards don't need no grocery stores.
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October 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #28...
You should have titled this one 'One of the Few Trials of Being Lord', cause it's
a headache for him right now. Tho' I can see that Harry is sloooowly coming into his
own as Lord and does have the attitude to match it, if he wants.
I get the feeling Ron & Hermione are going to complicate things by making shit that's
already tense worse. Hope they have SOME common sense to help when it's needed & know
when to keep their mouth shut. Because from what I'm seeing Harry can do it, he just needs the time & space
from everyone...to literally breathe, so he can.
...and I have confidence he'll take on Mrs. Zabini with pomp & flourish a bit while at it. Like I said,
he needs time.
You should have titled this one 'One of the Few Trials of Being Lord', cause it's
a headache for him right now. Tho' I can see that Harry is sloooowly coming into his
own as Lord and does have the attitude to match it, if he wants.
I get the feeling Ron & Hermione are going to complicate things by making shit that's
already tense worse. Hope they have SOME common sense to help when it's needed & know
when to keep their mouth shut. Because from what I'm seeing Harry can do it, he just needs the time & space
from everyone...to literally breathe, so he can.
...and I have confidence he'll take on Mrs. Zabini with pomp & flourish a bit while at it. Like I said,
he needs time.
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October 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Positively loved the reunion, those three love each other so much and you right them so well. They have such an absolute trust and a unbreakable bond.
Greg continues to make me like him. Say what you will of how he acted in school, but that boy is loyal and did the things he did mostly because he was told too and doesn't seem to have much malice in him. He has his moments of wit and is kind of adorable in this at times.
Severus being a brilliant adviser is always good to see and I am happy about the plan Harry has in regards to Lucius and perhaps Narcissa. It is going to be an uphill battle, but this way he can tend to his vassal Draco while simultaneously making sure Lucius doesn't get off Scott free. He is getting better at being a Lord and now that he has his closest friends with him, the pressure he has been under may become easier to handle. With Hermione around now he at least will find it easier to research different aspect of the bond.
I see the logic in keeping all of the Slytherins with him so things can run a little more smoothly and everyone can have their say when the trials start and judgement can be passed fairly, but I am curious about the fates of the remaining Slytherins students who weren't placed under the bond? Would they be targets? It's a given that the whole house has gained the enmity of quite a few people and if they are still at Hogwarts then Minerva has her work cut out for her if she intends on protecting them from revenge attacks from the other students. Unless they are all at home awaiting the trials as well. Or is it just the group with Harry that's on the chopping block?
Even after everything settles down and classes start up again, Slytherin house is going to have one hell of a target on all of their backs. Not just from fellow students but people outside of school as well.
-waits patiently for the next chapter-
Greg continues to make me like him. Say what you will of how he acted in school, but that boy is loyal and did the things he did mostly because he was told too and doesn't seem to have much malice in him. He has his moments of wit and is kind of adorable in this at times.
Severus being a brilliant adviser is always good to see and I am happy about the plan Harry has in regards to Lucius and perhaps Narcissa. It is going to be an uphill battle, but this way he can tend to his vassal Draco while simultaneously making sure Lucius doesn't get off Scott free. He is getting better at being a Lord and now that he has his closest friends with him, the pressure he has been under may become easier to handle. With Hermione around now he at least will find it easier to research different aspect of the bond.
I see the logic in keeping all of the Slytherins with him so things can run a little more smoothly and everyone can have their say when the trials start and judgement can be passed fairly, but I am curious about the fates of the remaining Slytherins students who weren't placed under the bond? Would they be targets? It's a given that the whole house has gained the enmity of quite a few people and if they are still at Hogwarts then Minerva has her work cut out for her if she intends on protecting them from revenge attacks from the other students. Unless they are all at home awaiting the trials as well. Or is it just the group with Harry that's on the chopping block?
Even after everything settles down and classes start up again, Slytherin house is going to have one hell of a target on all of their backs. Not just from fellow students but people outside of school as well.
-waits patiently for the next chapter-