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January 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM
How is the blood ghost centuries old as a ghost when he fought in the first Wizarding War? The first war was around 1980. You also say that Lucius corrupted the ghost's daughter; therefore the ghost in ghost form could not be centuries old.
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October 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Poor Potter. He's having a hard time between that rock and hard place with Draco and Zambini.
And Greg! Greg just broke my heart. His thought process is simple but he just might be the smartest or most correct out of all of them.
And Greg! Greg just broke my heart. His thought process is simple but he just might be the smartest or most correct out of all of them.
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October 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this story and I've just been breezing through it.
I love it. I love the idea and the originality of it. I've never seen anything like it and I think it's brilliant.
And Snape in this chapter was brutal and ruthless. I loved it. The "If you think you felt pain then you know nothing because my magic will not stop" was so in character and awesome that I wiggled. If my Other was home he probably would have looked at me funny because I actually started giggling. Just brilliant so far.
I love it. I love the idea and the originality of it. I've never seen anything like it and I think it's brilliant.
And Snape in this chapter was brutal and ruthless. I loved it. The "If you think you felt pain then you know nothing because my magic will not stop" was so in character and awesome that I wiggled. If my Other was home he probably would have looked at me funny because I actually started giggling. Just brilliant so far.
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October 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how Harry handles the aurors in this chapter is a thing of wonder. It's quite fabulous and controlled. I loved his responses and how he backs them into a corner all the while pretending to be innocent or unknowing of what he's doing.
Reading this was quite enjoyable. It reminded me a bit of Political Axes.
Reading this was quite enjoyable. It reminded me a bit of Political Axes.
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July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 63
Another wonderful story comes to a satisfying end! (Though I'm sure we will all greet with cries of joy any oneshots or sequels which may appear.) I think Harry made the right decision with regards to Blaise, as well as to Draco. Really liked this!
Another wonderful story comes to a satisfying end! (Though I'm sure we will all greet with cries of joy any oneshots or sequels which may appear.) I think Harry made the right decision with regards to Blaise, as well as to Draco. Really liked this!
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July 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about the end!!!
You better post some sequels I feel like you left this up in the air...when you FINALLY started
their fledgling relationship!
You better post some sequels I feel like you left this up in the air...when you FINALLY started
their fledgling relationship!
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July 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well, things certainly jumped up a bit here.
Before I realized it was the last chapter I was thinking that the kiss felt rather rushed. I mean they have only JUST now started to build up some sort of chemistry and the bond perhaps influencing them adds a bit of a squick factor. It just felt like there wasn't enough build up to it. Still good though.
Nice to see Harry put his foot down and leave Blaise to clean up his own mess. In regards to Blaise the bond is no longer forcing harry to stand for him so he is now up shits creek without a paddle.
Interested in seeing where Pansy goes from here and whether or not her story will make people sympathize with her or make her more enemies. My only complaint about her since I have actually grown fond of her in this fic is that it feels like instead of putting some genuine hard work into redeeming herself, she is instead choosing to give half truths, scheme and maneuver/manipulate her way back into the peoples good graces. It's a shitty situation but the cold hard facts are that her and the rest of the Slytherins have more than earned the enmity that the Zizarding world feels towards them. They have had a bad rep since Salazar Slytherins time and have gone above and beyond to keep that rep and make people distrust and in most cases, hate them. The fact that they were denied sanctuary should not have come as a surprise to them, seeing as how most of the families had Death eater connections and the students who were hiding had no reason to trust that they wouldn't stab them in the back.
And this:
Before I realized it was the last chapter I was thinking that the kiss felt rather rushed. I mean they have only JUST now started to build up some sort of chemistry and the bond perhaps influencing them adds a bit of a squick factor. It just felt like there wasn't enough build up to it. Still good though.
Nice to see Harry put his foot down and leave Blaise to clean up his own mess. In regards to Blaise the bond is no longer forcing harry to stand for him so he is now up shits creek without a paddle.
Interested in seeing where Pansy goes from here and whether or not her story will make people sympathize with her or make her more enemies. My only complaint about her since I have actually grown fond of her in this fic is that it feels like instead of putting some genuine hard work into redeeming herself, she is instead choosing to give half truths, scheme and maneuver/manipulate her way back into the peoples good graces. It's a shitty situation but the cold hard facts are that her and the rest of the Slytherins have more than earned the enmity that the Zizarding world feels towards them. They have had a bad rep since Salazar Slytherins time and have gone above and beyond to keep that rep and make people distrust and in most cases, hate them. The fact that they were denied sanctuary should not have come as a surprise to them, seeing as how most of the families had Death eater connections and the students who were hiding had no reason to trust that they wouldn't stab them in the back.
And this:
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July 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was altogether a good time. I will be looking forward for your one shot sequels.
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July 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
An end! Oh No! I love this story so much! I'm terrible at reviewing, but I look forward to every new chapter! Lovely!
I'll have to keep an eye out for the one-shots now!
I'll have to keep an eye out for the one-shots now!
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July 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #62...
I think I like the conversations between Harry & Pansy more than any others he has
had with his vassals [the ones with Greg a strong second], they are the most honest
and straight forward of the lot. I still believe Pansy makes a wonderful Shield Maiden
to keep everything..and everyone.. in line. I still see Severus as the most powerful Shield,
dealing with the unsavory, Greg as the Bodyguard and Draco as the Negotiator/Strategist.
Good chapter by the way.
I think I like the conversations between Harry & Pansy more than any others he has
had with his vassals [the ones with Greg a strong second], they are the most honest
and straight forward of the lot. I still believe Pansy makes a wonderful Shield Maiden
to keep everything..and everyone.. in line. I still see Severus as the most powerful Shield,
dealing with the unsavory, Greg as the Bodyguard and Draco as the Negotiator/Strategist.
Good chapter by the way.