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Ch. 28

"A somber look on his face, Severus glanced at Lupin . . . 'We can protect most of what's going on as the confessional streak is finished. I'm loathe to take him to St. Mungos because of what could come of that....'"

No. Loathe is a verb meaning to detest or find repugnant. The word you want is LOATH, pronounced to rhyme with "both." It's an adjective meaning reluctant, which I believe was your meaning. Snape may loathe the idea but he is loath to do it. The same mistake is repeated in a later chapter.

"...Insanity had taken a stroll through the Black family tree and shook hands then French kissed each member personally...."

LOL! That is a wonderfully descriptive sentence; I love it. I don't know if I've already mentioned this, but the titles of your chapters crack me up. I especially liked this one and the first one.

Oh no, trouble! Narcissa is on her way! Something tells me that Lucius will never be the same again. Too bad he won't be able to leave before Narcissa gets there. Of course her reaction when she finds out what happened to Draco is going to be priceless. I just hope she doesn't blame Harry as well as the adults. Outstanding new chapter! Can't wait to find out what you have planned for everyone next!

In my head, Narcissa doesn't have to be so furious after the adults. I mean that Draco is not a kid, he's a teeanger. So yes, lucius had to look after him but that teh other adults had to look after Draco,. I don't think so. What will happen when he will be adupt? Will Narcissa be behind him and looking after him? But i like your Narcissa...

I loved this story! So funny! I don't usually read crack fics as they aren't usually my thing, but I've read a few of your other stories so I decided to try going through the list in your profile. I wasn't disappointed, I ended up laughing like a crazy person for most of the time I was reading this. the only thing is I'm not sure who I feel more sorry for Draco or Harry.

Oh Dear. I love this fic. please, I need more, just like Sevvy needs his "peace" and munchies.

Also, every time I read of a chase scene involving Luc, I hear either https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x5sQL7q_IOI OR https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K16fG1sDagU in my head... the second song was for the scene with Sevvy and the Jarvets(jarvey/ferrets).

I think that one way for poor Draco to be cured of his emotional attachment to harry is for someone to polly juice into Harry and get all Alpha on him. The mere thought of Draco NOT being in charge with Harry should knock out the desire for him. that and the fact that Harry is "Packing Heat" should make him fear being a bottom...LOL!

ANYWAY, Love the fic. Need more "Why Me?" crack... Thank you!

-snickers- I 'almost' feel sorry for Draco. He is lucky that he didn't try to make the potion at Hogwarts.... xD

Lucius has finally seen the light! -"AHHHH," sings the angels' chorus- Now maybe, just maybe, he has a chance. :D

Does this mean that Severus is finally going to stop smoking himself into a stupor? xD

I count 4 stories with your name on them on the main page. You are like fan fiction kudzu. You spread out and choke all the other stories off the board. By the way your "reviewers" need new writers. They like your stories all say the same thing, no originality at all.

Ch. 23

Absolutely hilarious! But I wish you had written out that scene. *pout*

Ch. 24

Uh-oh.

"Swishy" Dark Lord! (Giggles to herself) Another amusing chapter!