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for The Problem With Spitting

by hot_stuff11

person HeavenInHell
schedule April 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like how the story starts. It is also well written. I like the way you portray Hermione's emotions; the lust mixed with hatred. It is really intriguing, and I would like to know where the story goes. I also would love to peek into Snape's mind. I'm curious what he thinks, or how he feels about the girl. I hope you will post the next chapter soon.