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for The Problem With Spitting

by hot_stuff11

person Anon
schedule April 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ahh I love it! Please update. :)
schedule April 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! HAWT! Seriously, so far it is very steamy. :-)
schedule April 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic and very stimulating! Next chapter please, oh pretty please?
schedule April 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
willl this be only a 2 chapters story?? Honestly, she was dealing with enough already. Her one-time crush constantly eating the face of one of the most vapid girls she had ever had the misfortune of knowing? Check. A pandering, political professor constantly trying to "collect" her? Check. Big, bumbling bear of a boy, in whom she hadn't the slightest interest, trying to get in her knickers? Check. The conviction of one of her best friends that a certain blonde Slytherin was the root of all evil? Check.

also i thought she was in love with Ron so why is she feeling this way about snape?? wet knickers when snape is near her??
schedule April 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi, now that was quick. And wow! I got what I wanted. I mean his thoughts on the spittle in his face. His got a tricky mind, I have to say. :-)) So, I hope I will get to read the next chapter soon.
person Missycam
schedule April 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Is it wrong of me to be aroused by reading this?! *blushes*
Thank you ;-)
schedule April 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
very tastefully written! Your wrting is poetic, and the use of the crude words is done at the right time, giving the whole scene more allure, and at the same time avoiding the vulgar. kudos, great job! the hinting at " rape" IMHO is not necessary, though it was through Hermione's consent the issue was evaded. However many readers might object, so I understand your notice. Hope to read "la pi
person guiltypleasure
schedule April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Death wish for sure, of all the things she could have done. I am so looking forward to the next chapter. I hope we get to have Severus' POV on this.
person Sammy
schedule April 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh HeheShe is in bi trouble! Cant wait till the next update! :D
person Missycam
schedule April 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhh what happens next?! ^^