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for The Problem With Spitting

by hot_stuff11

person Persy
schedule July 16, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Very, very NICE!!! HOT and SENSUAL!!!!!

schedule September 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely riveting. Deliciously soaking with beautiful grammar and hot sex.
person Cara
schedule June 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well snapes a bit of a tool there isn't he? Great story! Well done and bravo to Hermione!
person RiskyBusiness
schedule October 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Positively delicious. Thanks for sharing :)
person Mari
schedule August 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really hot!
person Aaron
schedule July 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am impressed nice she spit in his face he came on hers nice touch.

Thinking about a sequel I think Miss Granger needs more detention to see the error of her ways.

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person RhiannonULlewelyn
schedule May 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Omg that was friggin hot. I love this pairing because of its complex dynamic. Snape is not a teen boy, he's lived a hella life & knows a hella lot. Hermione would not be interested in a boring/brainless guy. So love this.. Dark & erotic as heck. Could definately flesh this out with issues of power & control. Theres so very few solid dark/in character fics with this level of plot and substance. Thank you!!! Keep it sexy.
person Esther
schedule May 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
so damn good! absolutely loved it! please write more! this was not your average snape/hermione story.
person fruit
schedule May 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit that was so dirty. I loved every freaking second of it. Can't wait to see more!!!
person Nixer
schedule May 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sad this is over! Can you not be persuaded to write one more chapter?