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Please please please write another chapter. I love this story so much.

Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!

Well this is defiantly interesting; honestly I can't imagine Severus cross-dressing. My mind refuses to see it ( I love Sev too much to torment him that way ^.^), however I have no problem imagining Ron cross-dressing. (I know you didn't have him do that, but it's the best I could do.) I look forward to more, keep up the good work!

Leania

well if you ignore the fact harry is voldimortes pet this sounds like a dom harry story to me since harry is the one who seems to be the one charged with training the other pets. so as far as pairings go i would like to see harry/colin and harry/dennis.

now if you were to write it properly you could have ron become an unwilling pawn of voldimort such as his family is taken prisoner during the holiday and ron is told to do as his new master says or they will be killed an just to show that they mean it bella or whoever very slowly and very painfully kills ginny right in front on ron's eyes. now of course no one else knows ron has been threatened to work for voldimort all they see is ron weasley deatheater and trader to the light. an of course in the end the only thing that is left of ron is a mindless puppet following orders because ron himself is slowly dieing inside because of all the things he has had to do to try and keep his family alive. an every time draco or whoever else send ron on a new mission they slowly up the stakes little by little it of course starts out with ron telling them things they already know such as the location of given muggleborn families an since the dark side already control the goverment they already know were the muggleborns all live due to accidental magic reports and board of education school records. so ron is not really telling them anything they do not already know it is just one step down the path to darkness.

as far as masters and pets go i think draco would give a great deal up to get ron weasley as a pet. draco has disliked ron weasley since day one so to see ron weasley broken and turned into a pet for him would be great.


now as far as harry being trained i think the other reviewer may have been hoping to see harry trained step by step from avery. such as the fact that it may have taken 2 weeks without food to even get harry to even think about being willing to suck his first cock or how he spent 20 minutes under a pain curse 5 times a day for a week before being able to take a dick in the ass without screaming in pain about how hard and fast his poor asshole was being ripped to shreds over and over again or how harry had to have the skin stripped from his arms all the way to the bone and regrown 17 times before being able to take any size cock at all down his throat without gagging.

Poor Snape lol. Really enjoyed it. X

Cool story so far :)

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Really liked it and am glad you liked my idea. ^_^