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Well, that was interesting ;). Cant wait for update. Hopefully, you will explain why Draco didnt want to let Hermione touch him and why he didnt touch her. Also, hope that they will talk (if possible :)) more to each other.... Anyway, look forward to reading more.

Whew! That was hot!! Not bad for Hermione's first time. Draco was surprisingly cognizant of her comfort (not actively participating in the event). Why couldn't he touch her? Or why can't she touch him? Is it simply because he thinks of her as a mudblood and beneath him? Or is there an underlying reason?
Personally, I don't like the font you're using. It makes it difficult to read and, believe me, I read your chapters fast!! Please continue to update! xoxo SM

I liked Draco's conflicting feelings in this chapter. you described his growing attraction towards our brilliant Hermione in a very subtle andconvincing way. Her allure is starting to weaken his defenses, slowly, which is the right way to go about it. good chapter what can I say. the dream , i think is kind of foreshadowing , hinting to future events? heehee I hope so. last thing, I found it a bit hard to read this chapter with the new font you have chosen, since i am one of those who read during lunchtime on their iphones. is it too much to ask for another easier to decipher style? thank you for the update :)

ok i thought of reviewing each chapter, but I kept on reading and clicking next ;) I am irked by Draco chaining her for her first time, jerk! lol I don't know how to explain it, but the sex scene , lacked an element on both their parts, passion was not in their reactions to one another, I felt them more on the clinical side of things, but this is my impression, so maybe the next time ( i hope there is a next time lol) they will start to open up to one another beyond the mechanical intercourse fit for 40 year maried couple lol . good chapter thank you.

Holy crispy crap!! It's Christmas!! No... Wait... It's April... right? Can't be Christmas... But... THREE new chapters!! YES!! Great story so far!!!
What a weird dynamic Hermione and Draco have right now. Especially the last bit of chapter 7.... I'm sure someone else will point out what is weird about it, because I have no idea to explain what I am thinking... Anyway, great chapters! Thanks for updates! Gotta work on final papers now!

It's hard to read with the cursive font

I like your story so far. I like the way you are describing the dark Draco :).
Cant wait to know what will happen next. How will Draco and Hermiones errr relationship continue.

Oh no!! Is Voldie going to show up?? Harry and Ron risking their precious sanity to go to Azkaban?? Hermione dripping all over Draco?? (that last one could be taken two *very* different ways, haha!) Oh, Bella, you are in for a little impromptu plastic surgery, I hope... If only Hermione could find a compatible wand....
I like it. It makes me all giddy every time I see "Yes, Master" pop up. Which speaking of, she sure hasn't been calling him Master, has she? Although, I can see how easily it would turn into a very dark story quickly if Draco were to punish her every time she forgot to use it.
Also, thanks! I was really worried ever since I wrote that 'unsolicited advice' that you may take it in a negative light... I'm really glad you didn't!! Love the story!

I like master servant dramiones and I usually don't mind if Draco is a dick in the beginning. However, the degradation is a little hard to read- like him trying to make her eat off the floor. I suppose canon wise he'd probably do that or worse. Hope though there's not too many more chapters of mean Draco. Odd I don't mind non con, but the other acts of humiliation Draco inflicts on hermione in fan fiction turns my stomach.

This story has me intrigued. i dont normally like reading seriously dark Draco, however i have hope that this story will make him loving in the end. upload more, the wait each day is killing me :P

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