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Well, I have only ever read a handful of HG/LV fics, but none that have played out like this one. I wish Hermione had revealed a little more about why she traveled back...was it a reckless reaction after finding her parents had died? At first I thought it was because LV had won in the future since she mentioned her life being so bad, but then she mentions that he had died. I guess one of the reasons to write a shorter fic is to not explain everything in detail so we can all guess and wonder why things were done.

It was different to get thoughts coming from LV (especially since with VotF/AtF all we get is Hermione's). I also enjoyed the mind games with a young LV versus a war hardened Hermione. It's a shame that she couldn't have found a way to utilize the knowledge she gained to stop he reign of terror before it started...all LV needed to break his evil streak was sex!

I'm not sure if it was intentional, but some humorous parts had me thinking of some great lines/moments from Seinfeld and the Big Bang Theory. All in all, you wrapped up a good amount of mystery, humor, and some smut in a well written, small package...well done! :)

I'll review more coherently and extensively (which this fic deserves) later when my brain isn't fogged from all the painmeds, but I just wanted to let you know in advance that I found this a thrilling read. Thank you for writing,

xx Nerys

this was great i love the insight into tom/voldemort's mind cant wait for whatever you decide t write next

Hello my dear, have you missed your lurker, well I've missed my writer, my wonderful writer. I have so much to say and so little time to do it but I will be brief in one word. WOW. On point, Setting the tone for madness. Ok so that was more than one word I got carried away. But can I say I've fallen in love and I know I know you have heard it all before but this is my favorite, And yes I love after the fallen, and victim of the fallen. No I must say that this sets the tone of all tones for what herminone would be if she didn't have Ron draco, and harry, no trovasi no this is herminoe and I love every moment of it, my wish is that you could continue it on some off time? I mean I've fallen so hard for it and I love it. *sighs* This is what would have happen if she hadn't stayed in the middle balanced in victim of the fallen. But this I love, maybe I'm a sucker for Tom/Hers and draco/hers or maybe I'm just a sucker for your work. anyway please continue it please I love it so much hell I've give up my fic for a heart at this. Your work is so amazing again good job.

this is great can't wait for more

Woohoo! Incredibly interesting, reading from Voldemort's perspective. I never thought of that before. I hope Hermione lets him have it!

I love that she punched him in the nose. FANTASTIC!

I LOVE LOVE this story. Hermione is so fucking ruthless it takes my breath away but at the same tine she has a brokenness that hones her to fine blade like consistancy. Tom is the bomb.com with his clinical and sadistic tendencies already coloring him. I love the fluid flow of words and the writing style. I can't wait for the next chapter.

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Wonderful ! I loved this chapter and I hope the next one will come soon :) (I am not a very patient reader ^^)

please let her kill him in the end