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July 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i have to say that i love your story so far and i can't wait until you start the sex parts ... might i suggest that you don't get Harry and Ron friends and when Harry and Hermione become a couple they're also both open minded and let the 2 Slytherin girls join them
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July 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, though re-reading this to remind myself what it was about has me really, REALLY hoping that Snape or Minerva (can't spell her last name) gets Harry to go to St. Mungos at the end of the school year. 10 years later might not do much but better late than never right?
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July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Might i suggest to upload the story then to hpfanficarchive.com? while FF might be arbitarily strict on adult histories, Adult-FF is IMHO to heavily loaded with Slash to wade through if you want to get to good stories
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July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done! This story is building up very well, I really like how you are taking it kinda slow, letting the characters develop. Keep up the good work!
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May 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is just brilliant and I really, REALLY hate the fact that this site doesn't have 'New Chapter' notifications. Great so far, I've only seen a Chaser Harry (Ravenclaw) once before, and you nearly never see a Harry Hufflepuff. Great work, I can't wait for more. I do find it interesting that you haven't had to change Ron's personality at all from canon.
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April 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Why is this story on adultfanfiction. You haven't written anything at this point that would get it fogged on fanfiction.net. Interesting premise but if you plan on writing as you have and not getting vulgar consider moving you story so more people can read.
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April 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters!
Continuuuuuuuue,
Z.
Continuuuuuuuue,
Z.
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February 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It could have more sex in and be more perverted apart from that it is a great read
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January 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The very best Harry/Hermione ever righten
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September 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Its a bit annoying that you first attack others choices and use it as a motivation; when you fall into several classic traps yourself.
Not to mention this is all your standard issue "Ron the Death Eater / Dumbledore the conspiring liar" composition.
Add to that that you shift between past tense and current and you got a very, very annoying read.
Not to mention this is all your standard issue "Ron the Death Eater / Dumbledore the conspiring liar" composition.
Add to that that you shift between past tense and current and you got a very, very annoying read.