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July 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I love your spin on the story and can't wait to read more. I also like the slow story as far as sex goes I fill it builds the relationship. I do hope there is some in the first year though
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July 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Really really good story! Please update more and soon!
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April 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I've enjoyed the first twelve chapters and would like to read more. Are you continuing with the storyline?
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January 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
really good story you have going on here i really want to read more so please write more :P
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December 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story, wish there was a bit more perverted things happening, at least some masturbation or something. Also Harry should decide to follow the rule of nothing under his clothes and take off his underwear. Please update soon!
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August 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well im enjoying this retelling of HP and TPS. Although my only complaint so far is that the house point gains/loses are huge (not really a big deal though)
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June 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This sounds like a fantastic story. As you have stated that this story is more on plot than sex I have a question. Is this also a harem fic? It would make sense to me, not in a way related to sex. I would imagine since for the first 11 years of his life he had no love that when it comes for romantic love he would have room in his heart for a few girls. Obvious;y, at least in my pov Hermoine is the main/first girl.
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June 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So, I just binged read all the chapters. This is a great story. While you typed earlier that there will be no harem's in any of your stories but Harry might have another girl besides hermonie. I wonder who. I hope you don't try to maje Ron good because honestly I truly hate him/his character.
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May 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Interesting plot. I can't deal with the constant changes in tense and the lack of plurals. There are many "He is sad so he went up the stair and goes to bed." I think that if you can find a beta, your story will be much easier to read.
keep up the good work
keep up the good work
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April 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
1/4 of each chapter is A/N and responding to reviews makes a person not want to read ur story! send them emails and keep ur chapters about the story!