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April 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Much easier to read now. Thank you so much! Not sure that you need any more help. I am very much enjoying your story so far and can't wait to read more. I really wish this site had some way to let you know when a story you were interested in was updated. Anyway I digress, lovely story so far. Love the differences you have so far made from cannon.
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April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. I really like that you put Harry and Hermoine in Hufflepuff. Original and agree with your reasons for doing so as well. I too have seen them in pretty much every house but. I so far only have one complaint about your story... when you put the dialog in bold it's a bit distracting. At least for me it draws my eyes as I try to read a paragraph. You honestly only need to put the "" between the lines of dialog. Again thanks for sharing your story can't wait to read more.
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April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hufflepuff is definitely the right place. In canon, Harry wanted nothing more than to belong and be normal, not to be cunning, brave, or knowledgeable.
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April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This seems like an interesting story, but your use of bold for quotes makes it very difficult to read.
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April 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good start. A slightly-perverted H/Hr story sounds like just what I was looking for :)
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April 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like your rendition and the way your story is moving.... Keep up the good work
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April 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Glad you decided to continue! Great start to your story. I hope to be able to read more soon! I really love a good Harry/Hermoine story!
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April 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
good start. i happen to like a story with plot; because fanfiction dot net removed a lot of stories last june because of sex, i look for these kind of storys. lots of plot with some sex. cant wait to read more
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April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm up for reading your story. Can't wait to see what you are going to write.
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April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Why did you bother to type all this information instead of just writing your first chapter?