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for Survival of the fittest

by Sasunarufan13

person Kat
schedule September 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!!! Just like RL. When bad stuff happens angst occurs. I love this story!!!
person Meechypoo
schedule September 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Im glad that Draco was smart enough to understand he needed help and went to Severus. Now knowing exactly what occurred will help Draco when he finally can corner Harry long enough to talk but now he will have the guilt of knowing how deeply he hurt his mate! Let's hope they can get through this too!

~~ Meechy
person staar
schedule August 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG after reading the first part(story) now this one I'm in love with them !!!!!!!!!!!! but please don't wait a year to update this I'll die !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! after all the shit they have gone thought your really need to fix it ~~~~~~~~~` see you soon with another update please !!!!!!
person Meechypoo
schedule August 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Though Harry will struggle past his insecurities and trying to fight through what happened, I have no doubt he will prevail. Just when he starts to truly doubt, Luna will be there to give hm some advice and a swift kick other ass to make him see the truth. Draco will be hard pressed to help Harry recover but in the end he will prove to Harry that he is loved and can be trusted! Ok...too mushy? Nah, I'm the HEA kind ofmgal and I will always hope that love wins out over doubt!

~~ Meechy
person Anon
schedule July 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Just an error I saw between the title and summary, but how can someone who can either impregnate women better or is able to get impregnated better a bigger threat than Voldemort? Fitness is the capability of reproduction: Survival of the Fittest being the competition of who can leave behind more offspring. If the strongest leaves behind one but the average leaves behind ten then the line of the strongest will die out while the legacy of the average continues on.
schedule May 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM

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BronxWench,

AFF Archive Moderator

schedule March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Story definitely hooks the reader!
Looking forward to the next chapter if not.
schedule March 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
geez...if were Harry when Sev's explaining that difficult stuff my nose would have bled. :) how can h say its simple??? Lol haven't read for a long time, is there anyway for me to know if you updated the story? Thanks! Would love to read more of it.
schedule March 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
kyaa!!! Can't wait for the next chapter. That ravenclaw bastard better be thankful he's in azkaban where i can't do him harm *smiles evilly* btw. It's too hot, i needed to get rid of my blanket after reading the sex scene lol.
person easyreader
schedule February 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Orange!! lol Really nice chapter. Can't wait to see how Harry handles actually showing.