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for Survival of the fittest

by Sasunarufan13

schedule October 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Absoutely love!

person magentah
schedule May 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Lovely end to a lovely story! I only wish I knew what name Harry chose for their baby girl. :) Thanks for sharing your talent, creativity, and vision with us. This is one of my favorites! :) Looking forward to catching up on your other stories as well.
person starr
schedule May 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I have so many things that were so good in the story, one was when Ron was taken !!!! and Dubbles demise that was good 1!!! Your ending was beautiful and I hope to see more of your writing soon !!!!!! Thank you again for this wonderful story and the journey it took !!!!!! :):)):):):)):)
person eros
schedule April 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so i like it... but does the baby have magic now >< Oh my gosh
person starr
schedule April 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It was great, you are so hard on yourself !!!!!! so good and the sad parts after the thing with Dubbles had me biting my nails off !!!!!! Thanks so much for this !!!!! see you in 2 :):):)
person starr
schedule April 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
notice any mistakes are you kidding !!!! all I can say is the reading of this part had me biting my nails off !!!!!!really good !!!!!!!!!!yes now the wait for the next !!!!!!!!!!THANKS !!!!!!!
person starr
schedule March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
always knew it was that nut job Ron !!!!!! so Dubbles is going to finally show up !!!! yes 2 years but the story has been wonderful!!!!!!!
person Meechypoo
schedule March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well it was nice while it lasted, but we all knew Harry wasn't going to get through the entire school year without the final confrontation with Dumbledore. Harry's luck just doesn't run that way! Let's just hope that all their planning and the power of their friends can keep Harry, Draco and their unborn child safe from this madman!

~~ Meechy
person starr
schedule February 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I still have my heart in my mouth here, just thinking that Harry was going to die and no one could save him !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope to see a gruesome death for Dubbles ok !!!!!!!!!!!Thanks !!!
person magentah
schedule February 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aaahhh evil cliffhanger! Evil deception! I don't even.. my inner monologue is stuck on one long drawn out "Harryyy!" so I guess I'll have to come back and review later. Very, very much looking forward to the next update, you evil manipulative heart wrenching author, you. ;) I say that with love and affection, I promise! Excellent chapter, thx for sharing with us.