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by KusanoSaku

person ChaosLady
schedule March 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Evil cliffhanger! Update soon!
person starr
schedule March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
yes I know I really like Snape and know that without him Harry would not have been able to do much or survive...yea Ron well can't say to much, never really liked him with all the things that he did,and Hermione well there is surprising that she is like that !!!! Thanks !!
person jami_lee
schedule March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Poor Blaise!! Poor Neville!!
person Obsidian Phoenix
schedule March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this fic immensely and look forward to your updates. My only wish is that someone would punch Ron in his mouth as soon as he starts spewing vitriol so he could swallow a couple teeth and maybe choke to death, and could someone pleeeaase put Hermione in her place so she can see that it is not her place to dictate other peoples' life. Maybe someone should give her a taste of her own medicine and as for Ron have one of the gang ask him if the reason for his jealousy stem from the fact that he wants all the guys to f**k him and he's just mad because none of them finds him attractive.
person Anon
schedule March 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well done
person staar
schedule January 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG Ron sure has a mouth on him !!!!! now with that mouth he sure has no friends anywhere and Hermoine well that's a given that she is a follower not a leader.....Glad that so many are at Harry's and Draco's side !!!!!! Still feel bad that Snape had to die...it would have been great to have seen him happy for once, maybe next story !!!!!!!! THANKS for the update !!!!!!!!!!!!
person BAFan
schedule December 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 3

Bill nodded,
person BAFan
schedule December 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 10

Okay, I understand better now why Harry will be adopting Ginny's child, but I feel sorry for the girl. She'll be a prisoner for the rest of her life. The rituals were just beautiful, but "Henry"? Really?? :-)

" . . .Set with in each were stones, Draco recognized them as diamonds and blue topaz; the birthstones of April and November respectfully. . . ."

"Within" and "respectively."

person delia cerrano
schedule December 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Still morning Severus. All those children, virtually the same age, good thing Malfoy,Potter and Black are all wealthy houses.
Like George/Seamus, Luna/Dean and especially Blaise/Neville as couples. They are all so cute in each their own way.
person staar
schedule December 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update, it's been awhile , to ask is Ron going to pay for his big mouth !!!!!! can't wait to see the reaction of the public when they find out that harry is with Draco and preg's !!!! see you soon !!!!!