Reviews for Lost Phoenix - Harry Potter

person TheReapersDaughter

schedule July 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM

is this story finished? will it be finished?

person delia cerrano

schedule July 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM

Re read a couple chapters and read the rest. One of the most different stories I've read. I hope you are goingto finish this. Poor Harry!! I want to see him rescued by Severus sooo much! I've always thought Dumbledore was a coward and a manipulator. He got what he deserved.

person whitebuffalowmn

schedule June 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM

wow what a great story! I'd like to see more of it, please. The battle was unbelieveable. {Please more of Harry, even if he doesn't remember who he is

person delia cerrano

schedule May 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM

This is so OC it's fascinating! Hope he finds Harry next chapter. I think you killed some of the people I liked the most or loved to hate the most. And Dumbledore...don't get me started on him! Good job Severus!!

person Bec

schedule April 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM

Please update! waiting to see what will happen

person delia cerrano

schedule April 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM

OMG! Poor Harry!!! Lucius too? When is Severus going to save him? That miserable clown, that self indulgent, self righteous, pompous creep Dumbledore! Please save Harry & find him a loving person (hopefully Severus who I most of the time love). Never mind Harry, I don't know if I can stand any more!

person delia cerrano

schedule April 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM

Sad, more sad, each chapter sadder yet!!! Please can we get him some help and/or revenge soon? I don't see how he is still living but he needs someone to show him he is worth everything to someone. Someone to cuddle him, love him, tell him he is needed & wanted.

person FairyBean

schedule April 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM

This is a new take that I havent seen before (although i did read a story where Vernon killed Hedwig by fire)

hope he gets saved soon :) Loving this. Do you do an update mailing list? or some sort of timeline of updates? (if not no worries, ill just randomly check back every so often)

Keep up the awesome writing

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schedule April 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM

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person BAFan

schedule April 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM

Well, you almost lost me as a reader when Hedwig was killed, 'cause that always makes me crazy, but I believe I'll continue on awhile longer. Wait and see what develops.

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