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Hey,
I just wanted to say that though i was one of those annoying "invisible readers" I have been reading this fic from when you first posted it. I love it personally. A lot of the fics I have to stop reading or find it hard to struggle through them because of the sheer amount of typos and inaccurate information and yours has barely any if not none. So please finish this one as well as your new one you began. :) Your doing an awesome job and your plot for the story is very original and I have not read another fic like it in all my trolling on the site. Maybe the negative reviewers are just jealous of your "mad creative skills" ;) Just keep doing what your doing because its working and those kids have got nothing on you.
Much appreciation and well wishes,
Hush

I am glad you want to continue with this story.
I think that in time we might understand why some of the characters are acting the way they are (so bear with my previous comments as sometimes I might have not fully understood your intentions). And I think I understand that war can change anyone... So hope to read more! I cant wait to see what will happen next and what is you plan for this story of yours. ;)

Please don't take the feedback that you've received as negative. It's your readers expressing confusion and a misunderstanding of your characters. They are so far from non canon so far that it is confusing. I think that an a/n that breaks things down without giving too much away might be all that we need. Chin up, I like that this story is keeping me guessing and on my toes. :) thanks for listening and I'm excited to see where you go from here.

Hermione seems like a hot mess. She attacks Draco for no reason other than the fact that he was arguing with her (which she managed not to do throughout her career at Hogwarts, even when he called her 'mudblood' to her face), she betrays herself and all of her best friends by letting Harry use her. And why would she tell him to 'let Ginny ride' him as a solution to him not wanting to have sex with her? She basically told him to keep having sex against his will, which is wrong no matter what. She has a very warped sense of what is okay and what isn't in sexual situations.

And Harry using slimy tactics to get into her pants... I wonder if he's not really Harry but a polyjuiced Slytherin. It just doesn't seem like the guy who died in order to protect his friends. That Harry is noble, and honest, and breaks up with Ginny to protect her, much less for not desiring her anymore. And for someone supposedly feeling guilty about taking Ginny's virginity, he's shockingly nonchalant about pressuring Hermione into losing hers casually, having sex against her will and hushing her up. That doesn't sound like the guy who depended on her for his very survival for a year on the run- that's what a selfish, horrible person does.

I just think that you could bring Hermione and Draco together without demonizing Harry's character or making Hermione lose her self-respect.

This had great potential but I feel like the direction you took it in is a mess. Harry and Hermione just seem like bad people. And why they had sex makes well no sense. He feels bad about taking Ginny's Vcard so takes Hermione's just to feel better about himself? And why would she even put up with it? I still think this can be really good but I feel like things need to be clarified.

Wow! I dont know what to say. :) I guess, as you said, the story needed this to happen but... well, the way Harry acted was awful. He got what he came for no matter what others might think/want/feel and then left because what may other "think" if he stayed a bit longer. And Hermione.... she should think about what she wants - Harry be with Ginny or end it between them and be with her? Or what? Now she can only get herself together and face all possible consequencies. I know that deal with hormones is hard and you just sometimes stop thinking and let things be. ;)
Also, I hope she starts to think about the way she acts towards Draco. I guess it must be hard after their past but she isnt any better right now.
Anyway, look forward to seeing what your plan for the story is! Please keep going.

This seems interesting and I look forward to seeing where you are going with you story.
In chapter 2 when Hermione hexed Draco I don't know I just didn't like the Hermione... she seemed to be off. I am not sure she would do something like that and a small part of me wanted McGonagall to walk in on them ;).
Ohhh, can't wait to see what will happend in the next chapter with Harry and the situation he created.
Keep going!

@3 I'm liking the story but I'm not sure im liking hermione. She seems really bitchy and stuck up. Especially how she treated malfoy. Anyways update soon.

DB

wow Harry's fucked up (excuse my french) but tho i saw it coming at the end like seriously ugh what a pig. looking forward to see how you make this end up working out tho

Hello. A good beginning and I look forward to knowing more about their pasts, so that we can find out what side Draco was really on and how he feels about living with her. I like that you kept her friendships intact. :-) Thank you and I look forward to more soon! HG4eva