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by Shan84

person barrette
schedule June 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, but it was so disappointing to realize there was no chapter 2 after such a cliff-hanger ending! I would read more in this story - what happens next?! You've set them both up as strong, fascinating opponents - I hope you'll consider writing more someday.
person Venefica Riddle
schedule October 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ow!! That was intense!! More, please?
person DB1
schedule March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow this was great. You definitely need to write more though!!!

DB
person chester
schedule March 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I am still fanning myself! This is fantastic!! Keep up the great work! What is it about smart, seductive bad boys?
schedule March 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A great read, especially as one character does not just fall under the spell of another like so many fics do, they both stay true to their core personalities yet are not rigid and static. they are able to experience new things and people, all while remaining true to themselves. i can see a sequel wherein the two of them retire for lack of a better word into the realm of experimental academics, with tom trying to regain power and control over others and hermione trying to control their research to apply to all in a helpful manner.
person Aleria18
schedule March 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved this story thanks for sharing it!
schedule March 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
u cant end it there! UPDATE!!!!