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March 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM
A nice start. Annoyingly abandoned
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October 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
where is the rest? oh where where?????????????I desperately need to read it...please please have mercy on your readers..write write write.........
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April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@5. Yay an update. More please.
DB
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April 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Draco, you have issues man. You might as well just cut out the tough guy shit lol. Hermione's patience only go so far before she uses allowed spells on you.
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March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@4 good story looking forward to more.
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March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
There's to much tell and not enough show. Also, you have way to much detail, she pick this up, put this down,etc. It's good to have detail, but you want to include more inner dialogue. Remember the sense, touch, taste, and smell, adding these to your descriptions will help the flow.
thanks for updating
thanks for updating
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March 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Draco is such an arse. You would think the war would change his attitude but evidently not. Hope he gets brought down a notch or two(or ten) Update soon!
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March 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue this story. I'm love a jealous and slightly dark Draco.
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March 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! :) i am so excited to see what you will be writting! i am also hoping that you will be following your pattern and not jump a lot! i love long stories and ones that give lots! :) i am also really happy that you will be posting frequently! yeah!! :) cant wait for the next chapter to see what will happen next!
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March 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome!