rate_review Reviews

Like this story! It's very smutty yet also sweet. One small thing that always bothers me though, coco ring don't keep guys from cunning. It's a common misconception made by authors who have probably never used them in real life. All they do is keep a penis erect even after organism and at most delay said organism. Not a big deal, just something for me to nitpick. Regardless, I enjoyed reading and can't wait for more.

Interesting. I'm liking the premis--looking forward to cubs, although I know you said not everyone would be duffing it all at once, right away. A few grammar / misused words sprinkled about. The most consistent, and I've noticed this in a few other fics, is "shuttered" instead of "shuddered".

shuttered past participle, past tense of shutter
Verb
1.Close the shutters of (a window or building).
2.Close (a business).

Have you given any thought to possibly adding more mates in the form of original characters, possibly breaking passed the Gryffindor/Slytherine houses? Will you explain why Harry transformed into animals (snake and deer) when going to claim his first two mates? Do you have an ultimate goal in mind for this story, or is it simply whatever takes your fancy?

~AR

i love it!!!

OMFG I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

Update soon!

wonderfull

Update soon!

I LOVE this story! Please update soon! I wonder who is the last submissive mate... Theo Nott maybe? Anyway, keep up the great work and again UPDATE SOON!

I look forward to more