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by TalisRuadair

person Anon
schedule April 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Will you add this to fanfiction.net too?
person Anon
schedule April 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Will you add this to fanfiction.net too?
person i can't help myself
schedule April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Cant wait for more! Now im practically dying to know who the other two mates are!? More classmates of harry's or adults from his life? Side note, i dont think ive ever found a good story with harry/kingsley.... But anyone, even more ocs will be amazing im sure. Update soon please :-)
person CM
schedule April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I read that Harry wants to fill Eugen with 'seaman' and I was laughing and thinking how many sea men? Sorry I'm really childish, I really love this story and the mates but I'm worried that there might be too many that he cannot give enough attention to all of them? I hope he pays more attention to Draco and Theo because they're quite young and maybe insecure?

I read that in Hogwarts that he would share his bed with two people? And it will be confirmed Alin and either Theo or Maeve? I hope he doesn't share his bed with only the mates he can sleep with and not those like Draco who he can't yet? and though he just met Alin, he might be one of harry's favorites (eventhough Harry said he doesn't have any) but it's a little obvious since Harry has already determined that Alin would be the only mate 'confirmed' to be sharing Harry's bed with Hogwarts. I really hope Harry doesn't play favorites because he has so many of them and it is obvious he can't spend time with all of them but if he chose favorites then it would really be unfair and cruel,

especially if the favourites are those he just met because it will seem like Harry will replace his affection for the older mates for the newer ones. I know that's not Harry's intention but with so many mates it might be hard? I hope it doesn't turn out that way because I'll feel sad for all the cute submissive mates I love most of them though my own fave are Theo and Draco, now Eugen ( I want to see his cute fairy babies). Not liking Maeve and Alin though it's because I keep imagining what Lucius did and eventhough Lucius and Maeve are not technically the same people(its hard) and Alin because Harry might choose him as a fave. I also hope that Harry does not use the Dominants to give affection to the submissive because he himself isn't able to because he's concentrating on one or two of them only. And my love/hate for character is of no critism to your work! In every story, there are characters people will love and some that people will dislike, and I'm just telling you my feelings for the characters. In no way am I asking you to change the story or to edit it to my liking because this is your story! So, yeah...

I hope you update soon!
person she-who-waits-in-darkness
schedule April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story i hope you continue it.
person pooh
schedule April 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the next chapter, this i going great. there's going to be a whole city worth of family by the time the story is done!
hehehe
schedule April 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! I love this story so much! I like how you've made Harry dominant, yet still caring for his mates. I can't wait to see what you'll post next!!
person Jan
schedule April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, even if its a bit rushed, still please update chapter 7 soon ^_^
person Diana
schedule April 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
person Anon
schedule April 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
heheheh goes out of the country and brings back some interesting souvenirs ;D