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for Here to Live and Die

by Lomonaaeren

person SP777
schedule April 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #5..

Because Draco is a demanding little shit and takes up time making Harry deal with his questions
*rolls eyes* Oh my gawd! U are trippin'! But that is SOOOO true. :-)

1. So the Tssisid [looks like a backwards word] are equivalent to wyverns in looks...maybe not necssarily
dragons? ...or yes they do look like dragons and their behavior is similar to birds flying north.

2. You know I would REALLY like to see the mumms in real life action, they sound interesting. O_O

3. Oookay, on that issue of trust...Draco doesn't see himself as a result of that? Otherwise he wouldn't be
with Harry...and do I see a massive sized 'Draco pout' here? :-)

4. I have an idea...if they really want to be protected from these storms, wouldn't it be wise to test how strong
Andromeda's shields are?
schedule April 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I had to laugh at Draco's first comment in this chapter LOL I could easily picture him standing there with an innocent look on his face while saying that.
But at least that particular argument is cleared up for now. Though I have the feeling things won't stay peaceful for long.
And while Teddy doesn't have that big of a role in your story, he is still adorable whenever he gets a scene LOL

Very nice chapter ^^ Looking forward to the next one
person SP777
schedule April 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #4...

Well, that was a nice chapter. :-) Harry has finally accepted his
role in life...and the both of them had a somewhat heart to heart.

Though they do need more of those. You know, I'm surprised you don't
focus more on Ginny & her bird at this point or at least give us some
glimpse on what's going on with her.
person SP777
schedule April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #3..

I was getting sick of Primrose myself...I was like 'will she move her ass on???'
Therefore Draco sticking a needle in her lil' red balloon was satisfying. :-)

By the way, this late in the game, but is Hurricane a water planet?
schedule April 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you made the sequel :)
A
nd Primrose has officially received the spot of the character that annoys me the most with her antics. Can't believe she thinks that forcing Harry to give her and her group power is a smart thing to do. Especially not after she was the one who left them before. It seems that behaving as the leader in her group has made her arrogant and made her believe that everyone would do what she said they should do.

It will be interesting to see what will happen now, now that Draco has said what probably the whole group was thinking. I'm actually surprised the whole group stayed silent, save for Hermione's questions. I thought Ron would have reacted as well.

Oh well, another great story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)
person SP777
schedule March 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #2..

1. Because he
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Eek I read this on FF I love this series !!
person SP777
schedule March 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What is the purpose of having Bill around? The man is a nuisance.