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June 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #9...for real.
1. Oh? You have an original story? Where is it? What's it called? :-)
2. Wow, this chapter felt more emotionally charged than the others. Maybe it
is because of the fact, the situations Draco & Harry are in right now are more personal.
Trying to have a family & now hoping Harry doesn't do anything too drastic that would get him
hurt or killed. Apparently those riders need a quick Harry Potter History Lesson. ;-)
3. Yeah, that dance was difficult, but you would think Draco would have an easier time than Harry,
since Draco used to dance more than him. I hope he doesn't give up and try again. YOU CAN DO IT DRAY!!!
4. ...and yes I enjoyed the chapter though I hadn't said it yet. :-) I think I put the wrong number in my last review.
1. Oh? You have an original story? Where is it? What's it called? :-)
2. Wow, this chapter felt more emotionally charged than the others. Maybe it
is because of the fact, the situations Draco & Harry are in right now are more personal.
Trying to have a family & now hoping Harry doesn't do anything too drastic that would get him
hurt or killed. Apparently those riders need a quick Harry Potter History Lesson. ;-)
3. Yeah, that dance was difficult, but you would think Draco would have an easier time than Harry,
since Draco used to dance more than him. I hope he doesn't give up and try again. YOU CAN DO IT DRAY!!!
4. ...and yes I enjoyed the chapter though I hadn't said it yet. :-) I think I put the wrong number in my last review.
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May 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You have an mpreg story? *blinks* What's it called? I've read most of your fics but I can't remember those containing any sign of mpreg. Maybe I just have a bad memory
Anyway, it's interesting that the Riders are sort of worried about Harry - at least if Draco has understood their message right. I don't really understand why they just didn't go to Harry and talked to the bond about it, but I guess they had a reason for it. Maybe they thought Draco would be more successful in convincing Harry to not to anything stupid.
And like always Teddy was adorable ^^
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Anyway, it's interesting that the Riders are sort of worried about Harry - at least if Draco has understood their message right. I don't really understand why they just didn't go to Harry and talked to the bond about it, but I guess they had a reason for it. Maybe they thought Draco would be more successful in convincing Harry to not to anything stupid.
And like always Teddy was adorable ^^
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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May 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and all of others posted here. I was wondering about the absence of art within the tiny community. I was wondering if I had just missed it. Is there no musical instruments or at least songs and singing? Those types of things are normally so common and present in every society. If these people were attempting to make a new life in a foreign land surely they would bring art expression with them. I can't remember reading in the books about any wizard characters playing instruments or if they were considered muggle and non muggle. I just thought about this and if confused me a bit.
Thank you for sharing your writings!
Thank you for sharing your writings!
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May 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hermione should have known better than to interrupt Draco's scolding XD Even if she agreed with his point LOL I was imagining Draco standing hissing and spitting like a pissed off cat for some reason LOL
And hey, Draco is one step closer to having a child with Harry if the ritual works ^^ I think this'll be the first time then that they don't get children through either adopting them or through a surrogate mother - well, in your stories of course.
Lovely chapter like always ^^
And hey, Draco is one step closer to having a child with Harry if the ritual works ^^ I think this'll be the first time then that they don't get children through either adopting them or through a surrogate mother - well, in your stories of course.
Lovely chapter like always ^^
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May 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #8...
:-] Oh yeah, I can DEFINITELY see the fearsome scowl & the dreaded Malfoy
pout as Draco gives.....Hermione the Look of Doom as she interrupts his Righteous
SERMON of INJUSTICE done to his person, ego and pride! Though the makeup sex was bril'.. :-)
..and what do you mean you suck at heterosexual pairings when you write...same concept,
basically the same problems in relationships, just different sex that's all.
Also, the dance you described sounds like it might a wee bit complicated for them. Is it?
:-] Oh yeah, I can DEFINITELY see the fearsome scowl & the dreaded Malfoy
pout as Draco gives.....Hermione the Look of Doom as she interrupts his Righteous
SERMON of INJUSTICE done to his person, ego and pride! Though the makeup sex was bril'.. :-)
..and what do you mean you suck at heterosexual pairings when you write...same concept,
basically the same problems in relationships, just different sex that's all.
Also, the dance you described sounds like it might a wee bit complicated for them. Is it?
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May 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
No matter what planet he's on, Harry stays a reckless idiot. Oh well, I suppose it's something that won't ever change about him.
I wonder how the others will react to Harry's stunt. Can't imagine they'll be happy about it - certainly not Hermione or Ron, though they probably are used to it and will leave the scolding mostly to Draco.
I wonder whether the winds are just a part of the planet itself or someone/something is behind them. I guess I'll find out eventually LOL
Like always an enjoyable read :)
I wonder how the others will react to Harry's stunt. Can't imagine they'll be happy about it - certainly not Hermione or Ron, though they probably are used to it and will leave the scolding mostly to Draco.
I wonder whether the winds are just a part of the planet itself or someone/something is behind them. I guess I'll find out eventually LOL
Like always an enjoyable read :)
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May 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #7...
1. Who says every novel has to have romance in it? That likes watching a good action
movie, then watching the momentum slow down, because the writer threw in some romance,
just to appeal to the female [..and male] audience. Not every story needs romance, unless
it IS specifically about romance or just a relationship in general.
2. You know, if you don't at LEAST have some type of yelling, at least give Harry a BIG pimp slap
from Draco for being reckless w/o a plan! As a matter of fact, I vote for a cheek painted red, but I
suppose that would cause bigger problems...right?
Other than that, this was good. :-]
1. Who says every novel has to have romance in it? That likes watching a good action
movie, then watching the momentum slow down, because the writer threw in some romance,
just to appeal to the female [..and male] audience. Not every story needs romance, unless
it IS specifically about romance or just a relationship in general.
2. You know, if you don't at LEAST have some type of yelling, at least give Harry a BIG pimp slap
from Draco for being reckless w/o a plan! As a matter of fact, I vote for a cheek painted red, but I
suppose that would cause bigger problems...right?
Other than that, this was good. :-]
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May 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
in #5... 'Draco sneered at him. You trusted them because you always trust everyone. And look where that
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May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm already anticipating the giant scolding Harry will surely receive when he comes back after testing out his theory. Draco is going to be majorly pissed off I think and I couldn't blame him for that.
And aw, Teddy is so cute and cunning at times LOL If they were still on earth, he probably would have had a chance at landing in Slytherin.
As always a great chapter :)
And aw, Teddy is so cute and cunning at times LOL If they were still on earth, he probably would have had a chance at landing in Slytherin.
As always a great chapter :)
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April 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Alright, your response to SP777's review was hilarious XD Draco wouldn't appreciate the name calling though LOL
Guess George realized that dropping Teddy isn't in his best interests when the godfather is near him XD
I was wondering why Draco seemed so very upset (well aside from the obvious of Harry hurt). I should have expected him to be upset if he thought his chance of having children through the dance were lowered. I don't think the Mummidade are angry though. (Well, they probably would have been if Draco had went through with attacking them)
And it's nice to see Andromeda actually contributing ideas now. Maybe after a while, the group will realize they have to start acting on their own, instead of relying on Harry to do the thinking for them - though it's partly Harry's fault for taking up that role.
Great chapter like always and the addition of new animals was interesting as well :)
Guess George realized that dropping Teddy isn't in his best interests when the godfather is near him XD
I was wondering why Draco seemed so very upset (well aside from the obvious of Harry hurt). I should have expected him to be upset if he thought his chance of having children through the dance were lowered. I don't think the Mummidade are angry though. (Well, they probably would have been if Draco had went through with attacking them)
And it's nice to see Andromeda actually contributing ideas now. Maybe after a while, the group will realize they have to start acting on their own, instead of relying on Harry to do the thinking for them - though it's partly Harry's fault for taking up that role.
Great chapter like always and the addition of new animals was interesting as well :)