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July 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Alright, first of, the most hilarious moment in this chapter was when Draco said this:
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July 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #14...
Wow, that was creepy on a scale to 7.
I take it next chapter is about what was discovered...and will
there be more reactions regarding Jeremy or is that over & done with?
You know, it wouldn't surprise me if Primrose was planning an invasion, now
that she knows that her Thunderrin can 'plant seeds' in living/organic things.
Wow, that was creepy on a scale to 7.
I take it next chapter is about what was discovered...and will
there be more reactions regarding Jeremy or is that over & done with?
You know, it wouldn't surprise me if Primrose was planning an invasion, now
that she knows that her Thunderrin can 'plant seeds' in living/organic things.
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July 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit O_O I have to be honest, I didn't expect them to get a child so quickly. I would have thought that an event like that would occur more at the end of the story, as some kind of nice ending for them.
Not that I complain of course - just surprised. I had expected the child to have Harry's eyes, but the picture I got from the baby's description looks very cute ^^
I do wonder though how different this particular baby is going to be when compared to a baby that would be born in a "normal" way.
Anyway, like always a lovely chapter ^^
Not that I complain of course - just surprised. I had expected the child to have Harry's eyes, but the picture I got from the baby's description looks very cute ^^
I do wonder though how different this particular baby is going to be when compared to a baby that would be born in a "normal" way.
Anyway, like always a lovely chapter ^^
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July 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about#13...
You know as I sit here & read this I can't help but wonder...what would the younger Harry
think of the older one if he could see him now? The experiences the older endured and now the
strongest wizard who ever lived, even if he is on Hurricane....and bonded to Draco Malfoy??? O_o
2. Awwww...I feel like a grandmother noooowww! *sniff* :-(
...and you're the great-grandmother. :-]
That was AWEsome! I knew they could do it...and now comes protective parent mode.
You know it really did make sense...it was all about the union & magic, not how well they
did the dance. Glad Draco figured it out. Points to the Dragon of Hurricane. :-)
You know as I sit here & read this I can't help but wonder...what would the younger Harry
think of the older one if he could see him now? The experiences the older endured and now the
strongest wizard who ever lived, even if he is on Hurricane....and bonded to Draco Malfoy??? O_o
2. Awwww...I feel like a grandmother noooowww! *sniff* :-(
...and you're the great-grandmother. :-]
That was AWEsome! I knew they could do it...and now comes protective parent mode.
You know it really did make sense...it was all about the union & magic, not how well they
did the dance. Glad Draco figured it out. Points to the Dragon of Hurricane. :-)
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July 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
God, Nuisance is so cute and intelligent at the same time - you have a knack for making creatures sound/act cute even though they aren't (like Kreacher - well, he isn't cute, but you manage to make him act in such a way that I don't dislike him like I did with his character in the books).
I actually hadn't thought of other creatures appearing after Nuisance, but it does make sense. If Nuisance was able to appear out of thin air/wild magic, then other creatures could come into existence as well (somehow I doubt you'll leave it at Nuisance alone).
Like always a great chapter :D
I actually hadn't thought of other creatures appearing after Nuisance, but it does make sense. If Nuisance was able to appear out of thin air/wild magic, then other creatures could come into existence as well (somehow I doubt you'll leave it at Nuisance alone).
Like always a great chapter :D
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July 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #12..
I know what I forgot to ask..will 'marriage' exist on Hurricane or will it
be all about shacking up?
I know what I forgot to ask..will 'marriage' exist on Hurricane or will it
be all about shacking up?
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June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Despite the fact that it's weird how Nuisance showed up, I actually felt a bit sorry for the ... animal? for not finding someone who wants to be around him. He made me think of a cat or a dog that nobody wants to adopt or be around. Which is weird to think of a fantasy creature LOL
But it could come in handy if Nuisance understands everybody.
It was an interesting chapter - can't wait to find out how things will develop with Nuisance ^^
But it could come in handy if Nuisance understands everybody.
It was an interesting chapter - can't wait to find out how things will develop with Nuisance ^^
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June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #11...
Well I gotta admit...That was 'THE most unusual, highly unexpected, kinda baffles
the mind' chapter. WHERE on earth did you get the inspiration for that/him? Because
the answer I thought you would give was the creature picked up the inspiration for the
look it chose because of Harry's forgotten patronus [forgotten as in..Harry doesn't think
about such things anymore, which is sad, since the stag was his father's animagus form].
But, it is an interesting creation, along with the name.
Also, you know I almost forgot about this story, since you have so many...you realize you have
7 stories going at once, just in this section alone.
Well I gotta admit...That was 'THE most unusual, highly unexpected, kinda baffles
the mind' chapter. WHERE on earth did you get the inspiration for that/him? Because
the answer I thought you would give was the creature picked up the inspiration for the
look it chose because of Harry's forgotten patronus [forgotten as in..Harry doesn't think
about such things anymore, which is sad, since the stag was his father's animagus form].
But, it is an interesting creation, along with the name.
Also, you know I almost forgot about this story, since you have so many...you realize you have
7 stories going at once, just in this section alone.
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June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmmm. I get a foreboding sense from this kires. I'm with Draco, Harry shouldn't have charged in like that and they should have left him alone. He's clearly very powerful and becomes more so the more he's around people and their thoughts.
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June 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #10...
Damn...Open Wings really has a way of making you feel like a 5 yr old. :-/
But he had good points, he would make a great Official leader. Because he
doesn't exactly lead them right...he just speaks for them? They're just part
of a smaller collective?
By the way, is there a name for said group?
2. I was HIGHLY impressed with Harry & his display of power...and I'm glad no one went
ape s*** when they saw what he could do.
I'd say more but I'm tired...
Damn...Open Wings really has a way of making you feel like a 5 yr old. :-/
But he had good points, he would make a great Official leader. Because he
doesn't exactly lead them right...he just speaks for them? They're just part
of a smaller collective?
By the way, is there a name for said group?
2. I was HIGHLY impressed with Harry & his display of power...and I'm glad no one went
ape s*** when they saw what he could do.
I'd say more but I'm tired...