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by Phoenixstrike

person BAFan
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 5.

So did Harry ever get to relieve his bladder? :-) I've had a few ultrasounds that require a full bladder, and they are a pain - literally! And men don't have as good sphincter control as women, poor dears. Anyway, I'm liking this story. Keep up the good work.
person Diana
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I loved the chapter...
Lucius deserved the attitude Draco had towards him...
And the last bit of the chapter, between Draco and Harry... I wonder when Harry will let Draco kiss him...
I can't wait for the next chapter,
Update soon!
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't really sure how well I was going to like this fic, but now I love it! It's a good read! I love how Draco stood up to Lucius, and how Narcissa is planning on punishing her husband for his foible! Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work!
person Talltree-san
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a total dick move on Lucius's part DX ! Glad to know that Cissy doesn't feel the same way as her husband :) . I wish we could've seen that kiss between Draco and Harry, but I guess we will have to wait on that special moment for that :) .
person Tee
schedule March 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i have to say that i love love love love this syory you have got to up-date ASAP PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person delia cerrano
schedule March 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is getting better and better! Can't wait to see what Lucius has to say! Maybe Narcissa will be more loving being a woman. Hope Harry goes with Draco to see him. Maybe Draco doesn't want to put Harry through that but hope Harry should show up anyway. Why doesn't Harry move in with Draco in Draco's private room. Draco could help care for him as he gets bigger & Draco is ostrasized by his House, probably his family & is the other father.
person Diana
schedule March 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
person Talltree-san
schedule March 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh that ending there was quite foreboding! I wonder if Harry will go with Draco to talk to Lucius? I think Draco could really use Harry's company in this little chat with his dad.
person Diana
schedule March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
person Talltree-san
schedule March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yes Harry needs to think positively. At least he won't go through this alone, he has Ron, Hermione, the rest of the Weasleys, and dare I say Draco too :) .