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for Expecting the Unexpected

by Phoenixstrike

person magentah
schedule May 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Worst cliff hanger! I'm so scared! Fantastic chapter, though, and I thank you for writing it and sharing your story. :) Can't wait for the next one!
person Jan
schedule May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Omg! What's going to happen? Please update chapter 13 soon!
person Larimar
schedule May 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hate cliff hangers, however, I love this story, so I am learning patience. Great chapter, very realistic pregnancy symptoms.
person Talltree-san
schedule May 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Man the suspense is killing me now! Can't wait to find out what happens next :) .
person Leania07
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Arg, cliff hangers of cliff hangers! This has kept me hooked (and away from my own story) and I can't wait for the rest of this! So, what's the name Harry picked from the book? We all know it's going to be a girl ( :P Draco should know not to dismiss Harry's 'intuition'), but a name from an Astronomy book, female...I've never been good with the constellations. Keep up the good work, I look forward to more (and to see what happens with Lucius; I hope Narcissa does something to her wayward husband.)

Leania
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A love sappy Harry, and overprotective Ron and Hermione. This is winding up to be something big, right?
I'm following it faithfully and ready to piss myself from impatience.
I don't care to say, that I'm a fan of your writing style, but do watch some of the careless mechanical errors. You're too good to let them slip, kay?
Ahh, listen to me. After reading this far, I feel like we're old pals ;)

Love ya,
Bob
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You tease, what a place to leave it. I am enjoying this story more and more all the time. It is really fluffy but I can't bring myself to object to that one bit. ;)
person Diana
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
person delia cerrano
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What? What? The baby is going to come before the cesarian section is scheduled? Someon else is going to attack Harry or Draco? What else could it be?
person Diana
schedule April 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!