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for Expecting the Unexpected

by Phoenixstrike

person Diana
schedule May 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chapter
person delia cerrano
schedule May 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It was a wonderful story through out and a marvelous job on this last chapter with the birth, the reaction of Harry & Draco & the rest. Looking forward to the epilogue very much.
person Talltree-san
schedule May 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Don't you just hate accidently smearing baby crap on your hand... I sure do XD lol! But that part with it being actually Pansy the culprit threw me for a loop!
person Talltree-san
schedule May 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Why that slimy bastard, Lucius just couldn't let it go! What will become of Harry and the baby with this curse going on with them?!
person reader
schedule May 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i hope you are updating right now. I hate cliff hangers.
person delia cerrano
schedule May 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh NOOOOO!!!!! I didn't expect that!! Fix it please...it ca't be like that.!!
person Jan
schedule May 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Omg! What has Lucius done?! I hope he's sentenced to askaban and given the dementors kiss! Please plate chapter 14 soon ^_^
person Leania07
schedule May 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh that...that...bastard is too nice a word!!! Everything was going so well too, then Lucius had to be an utter dick. Even that is too nice for him. I hope more will be coming soon, I want to see what his punishment will be. I hope this is the last straw for Narcissa, that bastard just harmed his own grandchild! Keep up the good work, I'm anxiously waiting for more!

Leania
person BAFan
schedule May 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, way to ensure an attentive readership for the next chapter! *g* That utter bastard. So who's going to perform the emergency C-section?
person Nicole
schedule May 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read more!! Love the characters so far.