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I wish Draco & Harry would get together and talk it all out. They've started to a couple of times but people & things happened. Severus is deciding for them what each feels, has done, & will do! Dumbledore is just as bad! I feel so bad for Harry sometimes!! He's been wading through all this plus Voldie by himself with Dumbles chaining him down with guilt & obedience. Severance just hates him for nothing and his friends are nosey & especially Ron is not even loyal sometime. Draco? He acts so self centered and unsure of Harry & himself. Won't go up against Severus, Lucius, Dombledore, no one to protect or stand up for himself or Harry. Poor Harry has always been so alone. Never even given the proper background & knowledge much less the love & caring that he was entitled to & it looks like he is not going to get it now either.

I imagine Dumbledore will be all twinkly eyed, for the greater good, wanting an abortion. Can you tell I'm not one of his fans? I want Draco to stop being so self centered & consider Harry & the baby's best interest for a change. Harry does GREAT for someone who has never had much teaching or caring much less wizard knowledge and gets NO credit for it. Doesn't seem like anyone is ever on his side or caring or admiring him. I think Harry would love to have a baby...family is what he's always wanted.

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What happened? I would have thought that bit would have been Harry's prostate and would have felt good. Maybe he scratched himself?

This is really good! I like the story and the latest chapter was fantastic! Can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing.

Just a small note, peanut butter and jelly is a very american thing, we don't even call it jelly, we call it jam. Other than that, great chapter; the smut was good and I am kind of liking Harry's blunt awkwardness about everything and while Draco's shyness feels very OOC it is quite endearing. You might want to watch for repetition of words in sentences and paragraphs, just tends to flow better without it, but again, that is a very minor note. Thanks for the update.

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