rate_review Reviews

You rarely ever to cliffies so you're forgiven. Short but sweet.

It's nice to hear from you! Wonderful update! The sex scene was great!

Pretty creepy. If you decide to write more about that side effect, I'll just skim over that part. Hope Draco starts acting nicer more "boy friendy" to Harry soon. It seems like Draco is just taking advantage of Harry more than any caring at all...everything is for Draco's own benefit. And poor Harry just wants to be loved and wanted and have a real family.

I do think all the extension,stretching and other spells they are using for sex are all kind of creepy, but in a good way, sort of. It feels like it is all part of the concept of the Peverell wizards and that Harry and Draco find it hot and sexy is enough.
I kind of really enjoy that they are so blunt and inexperienced with each other and don't really have a clue what they should do or say; that Draco has these romantic ideals that Harry is floundering to try and meet and while Harry is coming off awkward with his attempts, Draco seems to love it, so that is what matters.
The relationship between them is just so different in this story.

They're not creepy but the way you described Harry turning around when Draco walked in i was reminded of some creepy slack jawed monsters in like bad ghost movies or maybe something from Amnesia or even Husks and parts of the Reaper monsters in Mass Effect. The image made me giggle. Kinda feeling bad for Harry with the whole botched proposal, but it could have gone alot worse!

Oh my poor Harry! He says he loves Draco and Draco just accepts it as if it is his due. This is such a one sided relationship. Almost a slave master relationship. Harry deserves better but he always gets used and gets the left overs. He tries so hard and is such a loving soul. But he always gets the bare minimum and that grudgingly.

The vomiting spoiled the sex scene. Otherwise it was a good update.

Congrats and good luck on your final exam, I just did my final exam for my degree on friday, great feeling to finally be free of it. :D
Really enjoyed the chapter. :)

That was very sweet of Harry and very sensible of Draco. But I also ache for them both. Excellent update!

Update soon!