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for Peverell's Children

by Zakaira

schedule May 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am still really loving this story. I hope that they have arrived to discuss the marriage contracts. Also wouldn't it be nice if they decided to stay there instead of Snape's quarters, but I doubt the likelihood of that one. Professor Snape on a beach...well I think you understand that unlikely situation. I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed in a while, but I've distracted lately. I look forward to your next update as always and I am happy to hear that your biopsy came back benign.
person ChaosLady
schedule May 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful update! Why is Draco, Snape and Narcissa looking for Harry at midnight? And why is Draco willingly taking them to the Room of Requirement?
person Diana
schedule May 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
person delia cerrano
schedule May 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry and poor Draco! This should be a happy time in their lives. I'll bet Narcissa & Snape are going to try to cut Harry out of Draco's life. I hope he will catch on & so will Draco. I don't think I could stand the angst.
person ChaosLady
schedule May 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I didn't expect an update from you so soon. Thank you. Looks like Harry can kick ass the muggle way when he really wants to! Nice update.
person ChaosLady
schedule May 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Neither of those web address work.
person ChaosLady
schedule May 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is very angst-y, but it makes the story more interesting.
schedule May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hope that everything goes well with your surgery and recovery. As for what should happen, I think Ron should be expelled for what he did. I love the canon verson of Ron, but when it comes to fan fictions I generally hate him because he's so dense that he makes for a good mini villian. I would also be interested in seeing how Harry handles the entire situation. As stated before, I hope everything goes well and I can't wait to read what happens next.
person delia cerrano
schedule May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was a surprise. Please let Draco be ok and the baby also. Lucky that Severus was there to handle it so quickly.
What was Ron thinking? Faking what? Pregnancy?
person Diana
schedule May 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!