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Hi,
I've just finish this story, and now I feel that I need to write a review. I read that you never planed to finish it at this point, and to be honest, I'd prefer if you wouldn't. I'd prefer to read an unfinished story and wait if you'll have the opportunity to finish it properly than like this. I loved all the 36 chapters except the last bit of the 36th.
Erm... maybe you could write in the preview as a warning that it won't be a happy end. :S
Anyway... thank you for sharing. :)

I doubt you are still here I am continuing the story on aof and noticed something in your author notes. I have found that you are to eager to please your audience it comes across in your work as timid and weak. I have seen you have strong writing so this isn't really the case. if you want someone to wank then make them wank if you want to give sex scenes a break to start growing an actual bond between the two then do it. I will admit it drags a little more without the action but it is still your story to fluff up as you see fit. If you want to put Ron on Ice for being a royal prat do so (and I might have serious problems if he gets invited to the wedding after draco said no but again this is your story not mine) Ideas and brainstorming are great but your the one who makes the final decision not us. keep up the story.

What!? Please for the love of god don't end this! Or at least do a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! D:

Well, this was a terrible ending, regardless of what you have planned on another site. I wont follow you either. Fed Up! Is right, this isnt that good of a story to follow to another site. Harry accidentally raped Draco but he falls in love? Wow. It was rather bland and their fights are remarkably boring because all that happens is Draco bitches, Harry caves and then tries to make Draco love him.
I tried to read the story and keep up to hope it got better, but in reality, this ending is likely better than your planned one.

Feel free to not return to AFF.

This is a sucky ending, but I've read the other version of this story on Fanfiction.net and read your author's note from last time, so I understand why you are ending this version so soon, but it still sucks.

Oh rapture! Another writer that seems to think they are all that with a side of chips! No, I won't follow you to another site, no matter how much I like a story of yours. If you think so little of your readers that you're willing to pull this kind of stunt to them on one site, you're going to on another. You'll just find another excuse there to pull the same kind of stupid thing. It's not worth it so I can't be bothered to try. There are far better authors on this site that are most certainly worthy of being followed and me paying attention to what they write. You aren't one of them. The fact that this story is in serious need of a beta not to mention has a weak plot that makes little sense is bad enough but to just basically screw your readers over as a means for revenge because you're stomping off in a huff is a childish act if I ever saw one.

No thank you.

Have a nice life.

Colour Me Disgusted

I'm a bit shell shocked,stunned. While I appreciate your giving this story an ending instead of just leaving it hanging,this chapter wasn't the answer. The abruptness alone was jarring but what you did to Harry... I truly hate this ending and don't accept it. Like you I abhor authors who begin then abandon stories. I respect you have reasons to leave this site,but you're 35 chapters in! Surely you could have stuck it out,unless you plan on 60+ chapters. Anyway,thanks for what you've written. My first thought when I came across your story was,how in the world can you accidentally rape someone? It's unfortunate to call it that because Harry believed he had a willing partner. I have never heard of AO3, and doesn't ff delete m rated stories?

That is a horrible, sad, unfair ending!! If I had known I wouldn't have read this story. Not all have happy endings but I stay away from those that don't. Enough sadness in my own. The ending seemed quick and like Malfoy (I won't even call him Draco) was acting like a very spoiled brat! When Harry kills Voldemor & has all the power of the Boy who killed the dark lord then Draco will wish he stayed with him. And Draco will be a loser on the losing side bound for Azkaban. I bet he remembers Harry then. That's me wishful thinking. I'll bet Harry forgives the brat. The rest of your story was good. Just the end seemed kind of like you wanted it done with. Don't you love us anymore?

Harry always seems to be trying so hard to be normal & fair! You gotta love him. So under appreciated. And Severus, Narcissa & even Draco seem so tight and sort of keeping Harry out of their little circle. I hope Draco shows Harry a lot of appreciation & love soon.

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