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One of the best fabric please update, please..

Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!

so is harry going to become a full girl with a pussy and everything?

awesome story!! I wonder how draco will acted when he learns the truth.

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I think that this is a great story and the song for inspiration is perfect, although I do have one slight suggestion, if you do use a song in the chapter or one that is for several chapters even, if you put it at the beginning of the chapter with a note saying something along the lines of this is the inspiration for chapter(s) 3(as example) or This is the song to set the mood, then place the link or name of song and artist, I personally have always found it enhances the story simply because you see what the author sees more times than not. Again that's simply a suggestion, I love the story either way and find that it actually makes me feel even more in tune with Ireland as I have always wanted to go there.

Huzzah for your first attempt at writing; I'm very interested in this story. I'm excited about the possible way you'll explore these characters. I'm an avid slash reader but this AU is a departure from my usual. You have a multi-layered story here with plenty of potential. The hopeless romantic in me is particularly excited about Harry and Draco beginning to know each other behind the facades. Great start!

I think severus just screwed up, leaving them alone. No picture, thank goodness.

oh this is amazing though I wonder is this going to be a ssHPdm pairing or do you have somting else in mind?