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wow that was amazing.
I loved this story so much. the way u did Ron I think is vary spot on. he does not like to work and is a spoiled brat who wants everything handed to him. so sadly when poor Herminie looses her sight well this was expected in my option. I dislike that he cheated on her in their room AND bed but she ended up happy and with those who deserve her love and affection not just someone who sucks it up like a leach sucks life. the sex scene was to die for and loved every word of it :) my favorite part was when Ron stormed over asking if they were holding her captive ? them hold her captive ?! that's what u were doing. so please add more I would love a follow up story.

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I've just start read your other works so when I saw this one I knew it was going to good. And I was wrong, this was so far above good mere words just do seem to be enough. How do you bring so much life to the written word? The passion between Hermione, Draco & Severus is painfully beautiful. They have had too much sorrow in their short lives so I'm beyond happy that they have each other.

What in the world in wrong with Ron? I'm always believed he was missing a brain-cells but having the other woman over while Hermione was still in the house...UGH what an idiot! Someone needs to hit that man with a 'bits' shrinking spell along with an impotence curse. And leave in place until he apologized, on his knee, in front of a full press conference, all while wearing a sign that says I'm a Cheater and a Lousy Lover. Wish Severus could have a shot at Ron too. Got to be fair.

If your Muse doesn't give you anymore for this story then that's ok. Its beautiful just they way it is, buttt if your muse is feeling a little benevolent then I will be waiting.

As soon as I saw your name attached to this story, I pounced on it. I can never wait to read something of yours as it is always amazing and this was no exception. I loved it! Spent half the time trying very hard not to cry though lol. You are very good at bringing out emotion, and given that I didn't even cry when I fractured my spine last summer (and that fucking HURT), is saying something. I really hope someone did more to Ron then just hit him. Hex him horribly, one hell of a lecture from Molly, constant pranks from George, the works. I loved the idea of everyone pitching in like that to help Hermione, and George's inventions will help others as well!

I have to wonder about Ron though. He gives up a great girl like Hermione, for someone like Lavender just because Hermione is now blind? I mean, if I remember right, wasn't Lavender attacked by Fenrir Grayback and thus should have some nasty scars? *shakes her head* Then again, it's Ron. He's an idiot.

Loved the play on the "no evil" theme. It's one of my favorites. If this is just a little one time thing then it was an amazing read, if it becomes a chapter story when you no longer have so much on your plate then I will most definitely be reading it! Can't wait to see what you come up with next in any of your writings. Great job hun!

YES!!!!!! Oh what I wouldn't give to be Hermione right there. *wistful sigh* You lucky duck. You get to write all the good stuff. lol If it EVER turns into a novel length story, you'll most DEFINITELY have this girl reading it. Every fucking day. And I must thank you for that. Had a tremendously shitty day at work and to come home and read this... fabulous shift in my day. Thank you. <3

Great start. I can see this moving on to be a longer story. Second chapter?

wow. that had all the best parts of a romance. nicely done.

Nice little one-shot! Very hot!!! ou shoould expand on it someday. Thanks Muse for forcing you to write it out.

I am soooo glad that this Muse was so persistant.

This was a great oneshot. I mean, how can you go wrong with a threesome with Draco and Severus. My only complaint was that it was Hermoine instead of me in there *luck witch*.

Thanks for a quick smutty oneshot! And next time, don't fight the Muse...you know you can NEVER win against them.