rate_review Reviews

For a first fic, this was great!
Really well written, intriguing, not too drawn-out, and not gross with the terminology! Pretty much exactly what HPFANADDICT said.

Really well written! Hints at more, but in a nice -give and take fashion; not simply jumping into the sex, before a decent build up, you know?! Filled me with a strange sense of warmth? The list on his side clearly giving way to deeper feelings! Really liked it! Cheers!!!;-)

I actually loved this one shot. A downer though, for me, is that you made Draco call her hermione not granger. I just can't deal with Draco calling her hermione when they're just fuck buddies, at least not until they talk about it and things get serious if you get me, besides, calling her Granger suggest there's some tension in the room between them, maki it that tad bit more /exciting/. Hermione calling him Draco I can deal with though, I guess I'm just used to females being subs, but, again, this is just my personal preference :(

Just sex you say... hmmm, i dont think so ;). It seems like there is more than "just" sex between them... But who knows what they are feeling :D.
Anyway, good job! I hope you will write more.

If this is your first fic...bring on MORE!?!?!?!

You got right to the good smutty stuff. And you can't go wrong with Draco and Hermoine.

I look forward to more smutty goodness from you in the future. So...More, Please!!!!