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for The Other Man

by mimi1234

person Mark's Pet
schedule March 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Mimi,

This is one HOT story. I am so glad that you are writing more often and keeping this story going!!!!!

I can't wait for Hermione's reaction to Snape. But mostly, I can't wait to see what Lucius has planned for her (them) next. He has such a naughty mind and I love it when he talks dirty!!

So...More PLEASE!!!!!!
schedule March 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! I just came back to the site after a long absence and this is the first story I've seen that I really like. I'll definitely be reading following this one until the end and reading the prequel.
person colao
schedule March 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
that was a fantastic ride!
person colao
schedule March 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
fantastic ride!
person DB1
schedule March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@3 oh my god so so hot. Definitely want more!!!

Update soon.

DB
schedule February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hot hot super scorching sexy hot. No there are not took many English-isms. :)
person Mark's Pet
schedule February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Happy, Happy, Joy, Joy!!!! I LOVE Caught Out and have often re-read it. I am 'over the moon' to find that you have started a sequel *happy dance*.

This story is already getting HOT, and I love the dirty talk from Lucius. Hermione and I have the same reaction to it!!!

I cannot wait for more and am anticipating 'who' the 'Other Man' will be!?!?!?!? I have my suspesions, but will wait and see.

More, Please!
schedule February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, welcome back! And, dayum!! That was a mean place to leave us. lol I do hope you update again very soon! Thank you, HG4eva