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for The Other Man

by mimi1234

schedule March 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Totally love it!!! Please update soon; I can't wait to read about Hermione being filled by these two men (preferably both of them having her vaginally and anally ;))!

Keep up the good work and don't let us wait too long, this story is a true pleasure to read! :)
schedule March 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
His insecurity is so endearing. I am pretty sure he is going to have more than just memories to keep him going when they all wake up. lol Thanks again! HG4eva
person DB1
schedule March 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@5 oh my god very hot. Update.
DB
schedule March 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter!!! I've been waiting for Hermione to find out it was Severus! I can't wait to see what happens next!!
schedule March 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter =D
person Mark's Pet
schedule March 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
HOT, HOT, HOT...that is how I would discribe this chapter.

I want to trade places with Hermoine *pout*.

I know that this story will be coming to an end soon. And I am hoping that you do not wait another year, before posting a new story.

So to quote Hermoine..."More. More, Please!"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person colao
schedule March 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Damn! She is one lucky woman.
schedule March 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is an interesting little story! Can't wait to read more.
person DB1
schedule March 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@4 bloody hell that was hot. Update!!

DB
schedule March 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well dayum!! That was... wow! I loved every moment. I do ache for poor Severus, though. I hope she doesn't completely freak when she finds out who he is. Thanks!! HG4eva