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Interesting new chapter. Update soon!

All of the chapters and the story are Outstanding. I really want to know what happens next. Please update again very soon.

I can't wait for the next part of this story. I am so drawn into this I am just waiting.

I am enjoying this story, although I find this chapter (3) a little unclear on how Blaise and Charlie got together.

good story, this one and the previous part. There are a few incorrect words here and there, but all in all, very good writing. :)Can't wait to read more

Please don't have any of them marry Granger. As they are all from better families than her then through marriage Granger will get higher social status. I hope either she doesn't get pregnant or as it's a prank war that someone prank her with a potion so she doesn't have a baby or she's forced to get rid of the baby or it comes out that she is infertile. It would also then be good if Granger would then never marry. I just don't want Flint or Davies to have to be tied to her. They haven't done anything bad and it's not fair for them to be punished by having to marry her and then be stuck with her the rest of their lives. Also I feel bad for Uquarht he was thrown away by his mother and his father is dead.He shouldn't of done what he did, but he shouldn't be tied to Granger either. I also don't want there to be a baby because if there is then the child will grow up thinking they are evil because of how they were conceived and probably also feel that they are not part of the wizarding world or feel guilty that they are if they are raised by Granger. I just think that Granger would do irrepairable damage to a child and I don't want her to have a child she will just make suffer.

So please don't have her get married or have a baby please because her social standing will rise her baby won't be a muggleborn but instead a halfblood and through marriage her social status will rise even higher and after all her betrayal she doesn't deserve to be rewarded by having a baby or by being married.

I know I went on a rant and I'm sorry I just really want Granger to suffer and I think if she had a baby people would probably start being nice to her just because of the baby and if she got married people would be forced to be nice to her because she would gain a higher social standing and I don't want Flint or Davies to be punished by having to marry her and then have to live a life of sadness and regret because of it. I just think instead she shouldn't get pregnant and instead rumours about her should go around about her being a slut and about her trying to ensnare the heirs to pureblood houses. That I think would finally be punishment for her, to have her reputation totally destroyed and be looked upon as a slut and not a girl who got married and had a baby and lived happily off her new husbands money and forced her husband to live in sadness never getting to be with the one they loved.

Sorry. But even if I dislike the way Hermione has been acting to punish her with point loss and detention etc because she was raped is wrong. No matter the "morals" of the wizarding world you've created, date rape drugs (lust potion) and rape is wrong and should be punished a lot harder than the one who made the potion was. It is also rather hypocritical of the characters to disparage her beliefs and morals but at the same time support their own.

Forgot to say in the other review that I don't consider date rape drugs (lust potion) and rape pranks. I also consider that all 3 involved in the so called orgy as being victims and being raped.

I also don't want Granger to have a child. However that is worked out I don't really have strong feelings about.

Granger needs punished but not by condoning rape.

Wonderful!

More, more, more!!! Please, please, please!!!