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April 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
that sneaky son of a.... wow. have i mentioned how much i hate him? well i do! i hate cliff hangers 'goes to a corner to pout' please update soon!
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April 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ah... well. That was very OOC. From how they have been so gaga for each other I don't think Harry would believe that short note for a second. And he definitely would know that his ex should be no where near him when he is supposed to be getting married. Harry isn't that stupid and he'd be ready to tear someone apart for messing up his happy ending.
Harry being that stupid and not believing in Draco would also hurt Draco... extremely. Draco would have a very hard time forgiving Harry for this and he'd be justified in feeling that way.
Harry being that stupid and not believing in Draco would also hurt Draco... extremely. Draco would have a very hard time forgiving Harry for this and he'd be justified in feeling that way.
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April 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Harry can't be that stupid can he? Jason just comes walzing back with a smile? Harry knows Draco is pregnant - why would he leave now! He has to show more faith in Draco. He knows Jason has caused trouble before.
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April 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
that was sexy and sweet. i lived it. can u make harry tell Draco that the sorting hat was going to make im go into the snake pit lol? if not that's cool but i want to see his reaction to harryntelling him this.... well please update soon.
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April 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes I am really enjoying this story. I feel that Jason isn't going to give up his free meal ticket that easily. After all he was publically embarrassed. Besides he probably enjoyed riding "The Promised Ones" coat tails.
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March 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
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March 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
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March 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ohh, this ought to get interesting with the old love interest back in the picture. but at least harry and draco have started things. keep up the good work :)
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March 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
that last bit was a little too fast for me. but otherwise i think everything else was rather well executed.
Nice touch with the Jason bit there.
Dont wait too long to upload a new chappie.
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Nice touch with the Jason bit there.
Dont wait too long to upload a new chappie.
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March 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Kind of really like this story; just a couple of comments though: in chapter 2 you misspelled Fleur as Flure, and in chapter 3 Zabini as Zambini, so you might want to go back and correct those. Other than those, it reads and flows well, and has a potentially good story starting to pick up :)