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for Morning Larks

by Daye

schedule June 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

NEEEEED MOOOAAAARRRRR!!!!!!

schedule October 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start. I would love to read more. The characters feel accurate and strong, definitely a good introduction for them. If you continue this story I would spreading backstory in between interactions of Harry and Pansy, or other characters.
person Anon
schedule May 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this! HarryPansy is rare!
person Emilie
schedule March 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story... I adore the pansy/harry pairing.... please continue. Thanks
person Anon
schedule February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
More please. There isnt enough Harry/Pansy to my liking and I like the premise of this story
schedule February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a oneshot?!

WHY?!

It's like you're teasing me with this; like a drug dealer trying to hook a prospective junkie to their product! This is way too awesome to leave as just a oneshot! For the love of all that is perverse and obscene, you must write more!
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Continue the story, it's good so far.
person Ice13
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Must... Have... MORE!
schedule February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Promising start, I enjoy the rarer pairings and your style of writing has a good flow to it.
person Anon
schedule February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
that's a cute and entertaining beginning, and it takes the majority of canon personality and makes it work together while being very believable. they come off as two people, one in the 'wtf did I do last night' mindset and the other in the 'i'm going ot live my life and not wallow' mindset who've crossed paths.

and of course he has to see her again to get the shirt back, because he's so attached to the shirt.