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for Seduce My Father - Complete

by AnasumiHideki

person CrimsonFoxx
schedule March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please keep going, I really love the story and not quite ready to let them all go yet!!
schedule March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Ron manages to sound both petty and jealous while sounding like a friend to an extent. o.O Well, hope he keeps his word. Adrien is not one you would want to cross, though in this case, I think Hermione may be the one to really worry about. It's one thing if Draco gets on her nerves. It's another if its her best friend who is screwing things up.

I do find his behavior to be terrible though...it sounds like he is just leading Lavender on. If he isn't that interested in her, he needs to break up with her otherwise it just sounds like he is using her... *bops ron on the head*
person DB1
schedule March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
@59. Ron and hermione so don't make a good pair. I never understood why JK ever paired the two up. To be frank, she's smart he's dumb! Argh! But anyways great chapter update soon!!

DB
schedule March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear...Ron better not say anything or I am willing to bet he will get worse then the Panther treatment as he is supposed to be Hermione's best friend. Just remember, he is terrified of spiders! ...Just don't use Sev. We don't want Sev squished.
schedule March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So glad McGonagall didn't try to kick Snape out. I wonder how Ron found out? Was it the map? Anyway that can't be good. Ron's not really known for his sensitivity when it comes to these two. Hopefully he'll keep his mouth shut. Keep it coming!
person Missycam
schedule March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It's funny this chapter made me think of Buffy/Angel in their young days ^^
Thanks ;-)
person Missycam
schedule March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if I like Ron in this or not lol
schedule March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awe, that was so sweet. Hopefully Adrien will stick by her, I do feel bad for her though. In later years he will look like her son and then her grandson. She will be the ultimate cougar.

schedule March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see Ron's come around and there will be no problems in the future because of him.

I love the way Severus & Hermione act together, especially him taking points off for tickling the fucking potions master. LOL

I would like to see what happens after graduation. Does he stay on or leave to pursue something else. Does Hermione goes away to Uni for a few years or stick around someplace close to him.

I would love to see them eventually have one child, Adrien would be an awesome Uncle.

And I would like to see Adrien and Luna in the future, if they had children would they inherit anything from Adrien.

I have enjoyed this story so much I will be sad to see it end. :-(
schedule March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I haven't reviewed in a while, but I was away at a conference and could only catch up on my phone. Thank you for all the lovely updates, though! I am so happy for them. I laughed out loud at the panther and Draco's reaction and I smiled at Ron's acceptance. This is a beautiful story and I hope when it does end, you are happy with it, despite what others might think. :-) Thank you! HG4eva